A Soulful Cry

Mourning heartfelt loss nothing to the suffering inside howling ache

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Kim Van Breda

Date: 10/20/2014 2:57:00 AM

Powerful words on grief. I love the way you describe an ache... "inside and howling"-- very accurate perception. Thank you for stopping by my poems Xx~Xx

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/20/2014 3:31:00 AM

easier to draw kim when it grips wonderful comment thank you kindly your poetry a pleasure in reading

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/19/2014 2:08:00 PM

How true, every word Liam Brother!! A great Senryu write here!! All the Best and a "7" from me too. Cheers, Gary

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/19/2014 2:26:00 PM

aah gary your always so kind in your beautiful comments deeply appreciated pal

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/18/2014 10:50:00 PM

I am in these shoes, great write!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/19/2014 1:41:00 AM

thank you kindly arthur its an awful place to be bless you dear friend

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/18/2014 7:50:00 AM

It seems we are on a similar wave length. This is indeed a soulful cry.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/18/2014 8:11:00 AM

it sure is richard oh maybe so because i wrote a prayer afterwards smiling

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/17/2014 9:58:00 PM

It is terrible to think of a lot of people doing this but i imagine it would be heard everywhere in time of war and calamity. Very sad.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/18/2014 1:10:00 AM

thank you kindly andrea heartfelt beautiful comment deeply appreciated bless you