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A Soul Awakened

Eyes locked on each other, in dreamlike state Deciding to meet again, we did not hesitate Time could not erase, even though we were apart The promise to love forever made by the heart Pulled into your embrace, it said so much Enveloped in your arms, feeling your touch Words weren't necessary, our hearts spoke Powerful emotions in each other we did evoke Your lips upon mine, a kiss beyond sweet Laced with love, absence could not delete Your unique scent, I breathe you in Sensory overload now sent in tailspin Tear flooded eyes, fighting for control My missing piece, temporarily whole Fingers linked, can`t hold back the tears Losing each other we faced our worst fears Soul now awakened, blissfully enlightened Heart full of love, no longer frightened Healing process complete, happily refined Now in control of the heart, soul and mind 14/ 04/ 2013 Sponsor ~ Gail Angel Doyle Contest Name ~ A Soul Awakened

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/22/2013 1:16:00 PM

Cecelia....you know what they say...better late than never! Sorry I'm late with this...just stopped by to thank you for your lovely post and then I got to read this gem! :)....Wow...the sense of having found a lost love...the electricity it brings to play....ah....beautiful! Hugs!

Therese Bacha

Date: 5/4/2013 12:53:00 PM

That is a beauty really, very nice. Congrats. Terry xoxo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/2/2013 2:44:00 PM

Good to see you today AND on a winners list. Big congrats to you, Cecilia. Great message in your poem.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/1/2013 6:11:00 PM

Hi Cecilia, congratulations in Gail's "A Soul Awakened" contest.. take care~ LINDA

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 4/29/2013 3:07:00 PM

Smooth writing, my friend. Congratulations on your fine win. :)

Hidden Sister

Date: 4/29/2013 10:54:00 AM

This was raw and full of emotion. Deserving the win! J

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 4/28/2013 1:14:00 PM

Cecilia congratulations on your rhyme. I enjoyed it very much. Warm Smiles, Connie

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 4/28/2013 11:41:00 AM

Congrats on your grand win~A.O

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/28/2013 7:26:00 AM

Certain religions believe that at the moment of orgazim you are as close to God in bliss state as you will ever be in body ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Donna Jones

Date: 4/28/2013 6:16:00 AM

Congratulations... nicely done.

Carol Eastman

Date: 4/23/2013 8:53:00 PM

Well written romantic tale...

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/20/2013 7:20:00 PM

This is so romantic! Well done, loved it.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 4/17/2013 7:04:00 PM

Seems like the process you describe left you a lot stronger. This description is so full of grace and wisdom! A "complete" healing process is a really good thing. I find it hard sometimes in many areas to reach this state (though I think I try and really believe it, I rationalize). Thanks so much for reading and leaving a comment for me. It means a lot to me.

Seosamh De Burca

Date: 4/17/2013 2:55:00 PM

A beautifully romantic poem, sensual and heartwarming. I enjoyed this alot. Best of luck in the competition

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 4/17/2013 8:16:00 AM

Hmm. I love your phrase "my missing piece; temporarily whole." Yours is a strong contest entry, Cecilia. My very best of luck to you in the contest. :)