A Sonnet To Mom

Mom, I only talk with you by cell phone.
Our voices through the miles of air waves go.
You moved to an apartment. On your own,
you manage, though less spry than years ago.

I think about the times you read to me,
instilling love for fiction in my heart.
We didn't have a car, so through our city
we'd walk to places like the super mart.

Today I exercise, and that's for YOU!
You cooked and cleaned for us. Without a doubt,
you cheered us on in all we tried to do.
And how we loved your tales we laughed about!

Your heart, like Time, ticks on, yet Time can't steal
our memories - before life got so real!


This poem written for the “Who Do You Think I Am” Contest of Richard Lamoureux
after I read his  thoughtful poem “Before and Beyond the Bed,” which he also dedicated to a mutual friend, Armand. The lines from his poem that resonated with me were these:

"What I miss most 
Yes most of all is laughter
Playful exchanges -
Those times no one else existed
the moments when we were the best of us
before life became real"

Check out Richard's entire poem here: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/before_and_beyond_the_bed_653986
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Carney Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 5:14 PM
High marks for a poet who knows how to write in iambic prosody. Reading it the way most of us talk is quite remarkable. Am surprised more do not try to write meter, but I understand. It took me a full year to 'get' iamb. I liken reading this to riding a horse in perfect canter. You wrote a sweet, loving tribute to your Mom. Sonnets involve all types of love. Good work. Thomas
Vaso Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 9:30 PM
Andrea, I loved this, wonderful tribute!
A. Sharma Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 1:23 AM
Very wonderful write Andrea! Congrats on a fantastic win!
A  Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 10:54 PM
Andrea, congrats on your wonderful win. Love SKAT
Y. Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 10:44 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win:-)Alexis
Tor Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 10:23 PM
Andrea congratulations on your win.
Rebstock Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 5:14 PM
Enjoyed your poem.
May Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 4:06 PM
Wonderful sonnet Andrea...Congrats on your win...
Haight Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 2:59 PM
Beautiful Sonnet, Andrea. Richard must love this one since he is very close to him mom. Lovely tribute. Congratulations on your win. Sandra
Cwiak Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 9:55 AM
A beautiful expression of love and affection which just gives another perspective of the real Richard...and you. Great write.
Allison Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 9:28 AM
lovely tribute to your mum and I miss our dear friend Armand too - I love those lines from Armand's poem ... I can relate to that so so much:-( congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Chircop Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 8:53 AM
I remember that poem to armand..dear Andrea. I so love your poem dedicated to your mom.. She definitely instilled in you such amazing qualities dear.. I love this line best -' Your heart like time ticks on,Yet time can't steal our memories- before life got so real '..You made me remember of such carefree moments with my own, with a sense of sweet nostalgia and sadness cuz they're gone. Fantastic poem.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 6:27 AM
Very well expressed Andrea. Thanks for entering my contest.
Walker Avatar
September 27, 2015 at 8:28 AM
She did instill in you that desire to read, to learn, to always do better. I remember well those nights when she would read and put voices to the characters, if I didn't always fall asleep before she was done. Very lovely sonnet.
Inman Avatar
September 26, 2015 at 3:06 PM
Sweet sentiment, Andrea. My mom's 88 and I don't get to see her often.
Kendrick Avatar
September 26, 2015 at 1:11 PM
Very good work honoring your mother..Mothers can be a very special and good for their children, home and their husbands or not so good each one is different..I enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
Austin Avatar
September 26, 2015 at 10:18 AM
"Before life got so real" Aint it the truth. Great memories. Love, daver
Anish Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 10:18 PM
My mother is 81 and still works in a City Councilman's office. Nice tribute to a loved one here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 7:43 PM
I agree with Kim Andrea. I believe he will love this. Heartfelt and grateful!
Parker Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 6:31 PM
After reading about how your mother would read to you,take long walks, I now know why you seem so down to earth...
Andresen Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 1:14 PM
- Lovely poem, Andrea - (My mother is dead, but I often think : ...... "I must call mom, and tell her .........") - I been little time on "soup "in recent weeks :) - Lots to do :) - But, I enjoy your poem this evening :) - Best wishes for the weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pinet Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 9:31 AM
Perfect! Well my friend you have surpassed yourself...a pleasant poem with a genuine feel good message...you have captured the spirit, comradery, generosity and friendship you share with you mother, wrapped it all in a blanket of love and offered it to the world as a gift. Emile.
Lindley Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 9:12 AM
What a beautiful sonnet my friend. You so captured the essence of what a great mother is! That of deep love and sacrifice, along with time spent encouraging and helping kids grow into adulthood, but continuing EVEN UNTO the grave after that. A super 7....
Nehls Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 6:33 AM
Hi Andrea. I miss reading your poems and this is surely an example why. I still believe the greatest friend I ever had was my Mom. So many good times were spent laughing and learning. Thanks for sharing this great poem, my friend..... Robert.
Nunez Avatar
September 24, 2015 at 11:14 PM
Lovely sonnet for Richard and his contest, Andie. You captured the essence of his write and the relevance of the lines. all the best! hugs!
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