A Sonnet To Mom

Mom, I only talk with you by cell phone.
Our voices through the miles of air waves go.
You moved to an apartment. On your own,
you manage, though less spry than years ago.

I think about the times you read to me,
instilling love for fiction in my heart.
We didn't have a car, so through our city
we'd walk to places like the super mart.

Today I exercise, and that's for YOU!
You cooked and cleaned for us. Without a doubt,
you cheered us on in all we tried to do.
And how we loved your tales we laughed about!

Your heart, like Time, ticks on, yet Time can't steal
our memories - before life got so real!


This poem written for the “Who Do You Think I Am” Contest of Richard Lamoureux
after I read his  thoughtful poem “Before and Beyond the Bed,” which he also dedicated to a mutual friend, Armand. The lines from his poem that resonated with me were these:

"What I miss most 
Yes most of all is laughter
Playful exchanges -
Those times no one else existed
the moments when we were the best of us
before life became real"

Check out Richard's entire poem here: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/before_and_beyond_the_bed_653986
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 1/7/2016 5:14:00 PM
High marks for a poet who knows how to write in iambic prosody. Reading it the way most of us talk is quite remarkable. Am surprised more do not try to write meter, but I understand. It took me a full year to 'get' iamb. I liken reading this to riding a horse in perfect canter. You wrote a sweet, loving tribute to your Mom. Sonnets involve all types of love. Good work. Thomas
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Date: 10/3/2015 9:30:00 PM
Andrea, I loved this, wonderful tribute!
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Date: 9/29/2015 1:23:00 AM
Very wonderful write Andrea! Congrats on a fantastic win!
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Date: 9/28/2015 10:54:00 PM
Andrea, congrats on your wonderful win. Love SKAT
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Date: 9/28/2015 10:44:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win:-)Alexis
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Date: 9/28/2015 10:23:00 PM
Andrea congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/28/2015 5:14:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 9/28/2015 4:06:00 PM
Wonderful sonnet Andrea...Congrats on your win...
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Date: 9/28/2015 2:59:00 PM
Beautiful Sonnet, Andrea. Richard must love this one since he is very close to him mom. Lovely tribute. Congratulations on your win. Sandra
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Date: 9/28/2015 9:55:00 AM
A beautiful expression of love and affection which just gives another perspective of the real Richard...and you. Great write.
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Date: 9/28/2015 9:28:00 AM
lovely tribute to your mum and I miss our dear friend Armand too - I love those lines from Armand's poem ... I can relate to that so so much:-( congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/28/2015 8:53:00 AM
I remember that poem to armand..dear Andrea. I so love your poem dedicated to your mom.. She definitely instilled in you such amazing qualities dear.. I love this line best -' Your heart like time ticks on,Yet time can't steal our memories- before life got so real '..You made me remember of such carefree moments with my own, with a sense of sweet nostalgia and sadness cuz they're gone. Fantastic poem.
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Date: 9/28/2015 6:27:00 AM
Very well expressed Andrea. Thanks for entering my contest.
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Date: 9/27/2015 8:28:00 AM
She did instill in you that desire to read, to learn, to always do better. I remember well those nights when she would read and put voices to the characters, if I didn't always fall asleep before she was done. Very lovely sonnet.
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Date: 9/26/2015 3:06:00 PM
Sweet sentiment, Andrea. My mom's 88 and I don't get to see her often.
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Date: 9/26/2015 1:11:00 PM
Very good work honoring your mother..Mothers can be a very special and good for their children, home and their husbands or not so good each one is different..I enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
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Date: 9/26/2015 10:18:00 AM
"Before life got so real" Aint it the truth. Great memories. Love, daver
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Date: 9/25/2015 10:18:00 PM
My mother is 81 and still works in a City Councilman's office. Nice tribute to a loved one here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/25/2015 7:43:00 PM
I agree with Kim Andrea. I believe he will love this. Heartfelt and grateful!
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Date: 9/25/2015 6:31:00 PM
After reading about how your mother would read to you,take long walks, I now know why you seem so down to earth...
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Date: 9/25/2015 1:14:00 PM
- Lovely poem, Andrea - (My mother is dead, but I often think : ...... "I must call mom, and tell her .........") - I been little time on "soup "in recent weeks :) - Lots to do :) - But, I enjoy your poem this evening :) - Best wishes for the weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/25/2015 9:31:00 AM
Perfect! Well my friend you have surpassed yourself...a pleasant poem with a genuine feel good message...you have captured the spirit, comradery, generosity and friendship you share with you mother, wrapped it all in a blanket of love and offered it to the world as a gift. Emile.
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Date: 9/25/2015 9:12:00 AM
What a beautiful sonnet my friend. You so captured the essence of what a great mother is! That of deep love and sacrifice, along with time spent encouraging and helping kids grow into adulthood, but continuing EVEN UNTO the grave after that. A super 7....
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Date: 9/25/2015 6:33:00 AM
Hi Andrea. I miss reading your poems and this is surely an example why. I still believe the greatest friend I ever had was my Mom. So many good times were spent laughing and learning. Thanks for sharing this great poem, my friend..... Robert.
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Date: 9/24/2015 11:14:00 PM
Lovely sonnet for Richard and his contest, Andie. You captured the essence of his write and the relevance of the lines. all the best! hugs!
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