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A Sonnet On Solomon's Song

His name, like ointment, soothes. His mighty love is like the chariot horses of Pharaoh. His scent is myrrh; His eyes are of a dove. He feeds among the lilies; He’s a roe which through my window shows Himself to me. His countenance is fair; His kiss like wine. The rose of Sharon and a King is He. I’m His, and my beloved, my friend, is mine! His honeyed voice will thrill on hills in spring. Where pomegranates bud, the roe will run. I’m sick with love, and that is why I sing For Him, the apple tree, the choice, pure one! I sit beneath His shadow and I eat With great delight His fruit so very sweet. (Based on my interpretation of various verses From all 8 chapters of the Song of Solomon.) For Sara's Kendrick's Contest: "Song of Solomon"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/10/2020 8:45:00 PM
To read a sonnet about both biblical themes and romantic love is rare indeed, but you did justice to both. A book of the Bible I have grown to enjoy more after being married, and even more after becoming interested in poetry. Your take just sings with poetic love and passion. Beautifully rendered, my friend ~ John
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Date: 1/2/2018 1:35:00 PM
Beautiful, congrats on your well deserved win, Andrea.
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Date: 12/29/2017 9:11:00 AM
Congratulations, you did it! I struck out again and wish it didn't phase me, but it is blowing my wee mind. So glad you got through, something we can finally applaud. Love ya ... CayCay
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Date: 12/29/2017 8:29:00 AM
Superb sonnet, Andrea! Congrats. Janice
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Date: 12/29/2017 8:05:00 AM
This is gorgeous! I can see why you won top honors!
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Date: 12/29/2017 7:41:00 AM
This is stunning, Andrea. So glad you submitted that to the contest and we get to read this. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/15/2011 4:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning entry Jon
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Date: 12/12/2011 11:59:00 PM
great win here babe, Solomon rocks on...
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Date: 12/12/2011 9:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Sara's "Song Of Solomon" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/10/2011 11:28:00 PM
Hi Andrea, I really enjoyed this and I know I commented on it, but must have been in an email. I am very happy to see you got second place with this inspiring piece. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/10/2011 3:40:00 PM
Very sweeet words, Andrea. Congrats on this sensual write.
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Date: 12/10/2011 1:18:00 PM
lovely...................very same interpretation as mine....kinda traditional biblical schmiblical ...i liked it very much you is a good writer ,,,, no doubt Andrea
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Date: 12/10/2011 10:23:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations in Sara's contest, have a wonderful day,..p.s.
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Date: 12/10/2011 9:46:00 AM
A great sonnet. This was a great subject for inspirtion. Congratulatios. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/10/2011 9:40:00 AM
Congrats for great win on great Sonnet. bl
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Date: 12/10/2011 9:25:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your good work..I appreciate you participating in my contest..Soup mail soon..Sara
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Date: 11/11/2011 11:36:00 AM
A awesome write on this sonnet for the contest. Now I have my grilled cheese sandwich for lunch I can continue on. So behind on comments that i should just do a blog. love phyl
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Date: 11/9/2011 5:34:00 PM
precious words Andrea.. good luck in the contest .. my only time on PS before my eyes slowly close..haha.. posting one more for Francine..then calling it a night luv..
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Date: 11/8/2011 10:29:00 AM
Wow, an amazing piece here, Andrea. A big winner, for sure
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Date: 11/8/2011 7:56:00 AM
Magnificently written a visual beauty in words. Beautifully written a great sweet sonnet my friend, which flows like the cool breeze touching the mind and heart. It was a joy to read these lines. My good wishes for your contest entry and thank you for your valuable and kind comments on my Dewali Poem. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra...Andrea Dietrich.
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Date: 11/7/2011 3:09:00 PM
As the prophetess arose. She sang of solemn prose. And villages began to understand. The wisdom whispered from the hills. His truth will always stand.
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Date: 11/7/2011 11:06:00 AM
Yours might be better than mine. Tony
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Date: 11/7/2011 6:35:00 AM
very good Sonnet.I am eager to know which one is your best sonnet.I have to google Solomon's Song for this contest.
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Date: 11/6/2011 10:30:00 PM
I am glad this one came to my screen tonight:) I need to pick up the "Sword" for a good reading soon! Thanks for writing me back! Always like to hear from you! Congrats on all these placements and wins I see from you lately. Your Friend:) ~JOEY
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Date: 11/6/2011 8:46:00 PM
To love and be loved in such a glorious manner. Immortal and mortal. Beautiful...Margaret
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