A Sonnet On Solomon's Song

His name, like ointment, soothes. His mighty love
is like the chariot horses of Pharaoh.
His scent is myrrh; His eyes are of a dove.
He feeds among the lilies; He’s a roe
which through my window shows Himself to me.
His countenance is fair; His kiss like wine.
The rose of Sharon and a King is He.
I’m His, and my beloved, my friend, is mine!

His honeyed voice will thrill on hills in spring.
Where pomegranates bud, the roe will run.
I’m sick with love, and that is why I sing
For Him, the apple tree, the choice, pure one!

I sit beneath His shadow and I eat
With great delight His fruit so very sweet.

(Based on my interpretation of various verses
From all 8 chapters of the Song of Solomon.)

For Sara's Kendrick's Contest: "Song of Solomon"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Watt Avatar
October 10, 2020 at 8:45 PM
To read a sonnet about both biblical themes and romantic love is rare indeed, but you did justice to both. A book of the Bible I have grown to enjoy more after being married, and even more after becoming interested in poetry. Your take just sings with poetic love and passion. Beautifully rendered, my friend ~ John
Gauthier Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 1:35 PM
Beautiful, congrats on your well deserved win, Andrea.
Godwin Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 9:11 AM
Congratulations, you did it! I struck out again and wish it didn't phase me, but it is blowing my wee mind. So glad you got through, something we can finally applaud. Love ya ... CayCay
Canerdy Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 8:29 AM
Superb sonnet, Andrea! Congrats. Janice
Cozart Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 8:05 AM
This is gorgeous! I can see why you won top honors!
Krampe Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 7:41 AM
This is stunning, Andrea. So glad you submitted that to the contest and we get to read this. Congrats on your win.
Arno Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 4:05 PM
Congratulations on your winning entry Jon
Johnson Avatar
December 12, 2011 at 11:59 PM
great win here babe, Solomon rocks on...
Brown Avatar
December 12, 2011 at 9:20 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Sara's "Song Of Solomon" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 10, 2011 at 11:28 PM
Hi Andrea, I really enjoyed this and I know I commented on it, but must have been in an email. I am very happy to see you got second place with this inspiring piece. Congratulations!
Song Avatar
December 10, 2011 at 3:40 PM
Very sweeet words, Andrea. Congrats on this sensual write.
Beck Avatar
December 10, 2011 at 1:18 PM
lovely...................very same interpretation as mine....kinda traditional biblical schmiblical ...i liked it very much you is a good writer ,,,, no doubt Andrea
A   Avatar
December 10, 2011 at 10:23 AM
Andrea, congratulations in Sara's contest, have a wonderful day,..p.s.
Johnson Avatar
December 10, 2011 at 9:46 AM
A great sonnet. This was a great subject for inspirtion. Congratulatios. Love, Joyce
Devnath  Avatar
December 10, 2011 at 9:40 AM
Congrats for great win on great Sonnet. bl
Kendrick Avatar
December 10, 2011 at 9:25 AM
Enjoyed reading your good work..I appreciate you participating in my contest..Soup mail soon..Sara
Babcock Avatar
November 11, 2011 at 11:36 AM
A awesome write on this sonnet for the contest. Now I have my grilled cheese sandwich for lunch I can continue on. So behind on comments that i should just do a blog. love phyl
Sweetheart Avatar
November 9, 2011 at 5:34 PM
precious words Andrea.. good luck in the contest .. my only time on PS before my eyes slowly close..haha.. posting one more for Francine..then calling it a night luv..
Horne Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 10:29 AM
Wow, an amazing piece here, Andrea. A big winner, for sure
Kapoor Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 7:56 AM
Magnificently written a visual beauty in words. Beautifully written a great sweet sonnet my friend, which flows like the cool breeze touching the mind and heart. It was a joy to read these lines. My good wishes for your contest entry and thank you for your valuable and kind comments on my Dewali Poem. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra...Andrea Dietrich.
Johnson Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 3:09 PM
As the prophetess arose. She sang of solemn prose. And villages began to understand. The wisdom whispered from the hills. His truth will always stand.
Lane Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 11:06 AM
Yours might be better than mine. Tony
Poet Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 6:35 AM
very good Sonnet.I am eager to know which one is your best sonnet.I have to google Solomon's Song for this contest.
Mister Roboto Avatar
November 6, 2011 at 10:30 PM
I am glad this one came to my screen tonight:) I need to pick up the "Sword" for a good reading soon! Thanks for writing me back! Always like to hear from you! Congrats on all these placements and wins I see from you lately. Your Friend:) ~JOEY
Foster Avatar
November 6, 2011 at 8:46 PM
To love and be loved in such a glorious manner. Immortal and mortal. Beautiful...Margaret
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