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A Sonnet for the Empress

In shadows draped, my night empress does glide, Amidst the moonlit meadow’s misty sigh, Her raven locks, a midnight river’s tide, Flow ‘neath the moonbeam’s haunting silver sky. Her eyes, orbs of obsidian’s deep spell, Entrap all who meet her amorous gaze, No roses match her cheeks’ alluring swell, In twilight’s grasp, a gothic love ablaze. Her lips, a sinful shade of deepest night, To taste the poison from her tempting kiss, A venomous allure, a dark delight, Her pale milky skin, passion’s subtle bliss. In corset tight, she holds her lustful spell, To love her is to court the fire of hell.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 6/12/2024 5:46:00 AM
Edward, whoa there! That’s what i said upon reading rge last word of this fantastic poem! I just your descriptions for your work is filled with them and not a cliche anywhere! Your rhymes likewise. You are a wonderful writer! Hugs, sally
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Date: 5/24/2024 6:36:00 AM
Dear Edward, What a mesmerizing ode to the allure and mystery of the night empress. Your imagery vividly depicts her haunting beauty, draped in shadows and moonlight. I loved the language you've chosen which evokes a sense of enchantment and danger, capturing the essence of gothic romance. A very captivating piece—it's truly spellbinding. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Edward Wraith
Date: 5/24/2024 7:58:00 AM
Daniel, Your gracious words have cast a light upon my humble creation, illuminating its darkened corners with your kind praise. I am honored that my ode to the night empress resonated with you, and that the imagery of her haunting beauty draped in shadows and moonlight stirred your senses. The enchantment and danger of gothic romance are dear to my heart, and to know that they captured your imagination enlightens me. Thank you
Date: 5/23/2024 7:21:00 PM
Rhiannon? That's what came to mind anyway. Nice to meet a fellow sonneteer
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Edward Wraith
Date: 5/24/2024 8:00:00 AM
Ah, Rhiannon—a name that conjures the mystique of ancient lore and poetic inspiration. There is a whisper of Rhiannon in the cool night air. (What a great song from a legendary band) It’s a pleasure to connect with a fellow sonneteer. May our verses continue to weave tales of beauty and enchantment. Thank you Tom
Date: 5/23/2024 6:37:00 PM
' Her lips, a sinful shade. ' Sounds tempting, indeed. To taste her kiss and drown in her love, would be ' subtle bliss. ' So deep and dark, yet sensual and passionate, all at the same time. I'm breathless.
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Edward Wraith
Date: 5/24/2024 8:05:00 AM
I’m delighted to know her sinful shade has so ensnared you. To taste her tantalizing kiss and drown in her dark love is to surrender to a seductive symphony. The shadows and sensuality entwine, a dance of temptation and tender torment, weaving a web of subtle bliss. Thank you for losing yourself in the depths of my desire-laden words. Yours in dark delight, Edward

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