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A Sonnet for the Empress

In shadows draped, my night empress does glide, Amidst the moonlit meadow’s misty sigh, Her raven locks, a midnight river’s tide, Flow ‘neath the moonbeam’s haunting silver sky. Her eyes, orbs of obsidian’s deep spell, Entrap all who meet her amorous gaze, No roses match her cheeks’ alluring swell, In twilight’s grasp, a gothic love ablaze. Her lips, a sinful shade of deepest night, To taste the poison from her tempting kiss, A venomous allure, a dark delight, Her pale milky skin, passion’s subtle bliss. In corset tight, she holds her lustful spell, To love her is to court the fire of hell.

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Date: 2/2/2025 11:07:00 AM
Oooo... very cleverly written and an exciting read! Congrats on the win! Xo
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Edward Wraith
Date: 2/6/2025 2:46:00 PM
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on my musing dear, your support means more than you know. I hope all is well with you.
Date: 2/1/2025 10:22:00 AM
Sensuous sonnet. Congrats for the win.
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Edward Wraith
Date: 2/6/2025 2:48:00 PM
Hey Jay, So kind of you to drop in and stay for a spell. I am so pleased you enjoyed this one. I appreciate the congratulatory sentiments my friend.
Date: 2/1/2025 2:37:00 AM
A dark delight indeed fabulous work, congratulations
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Edward Wraith
Date: 2/6/2025 2:49:00 PM
Terry, Thank you so much for the congratulations, your comments and support mean more than you know. I am so pleased you enjoyed this sonnet.
Date: 1/31/2025 4:04:00 PM
Hey nice placement Edward, though I thought the rules said had to be a new poem. Oh well, rules schmules
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Edward Wraith
Date: 2/6/2025 2:50:00 PM
Ouch, like a dagger this comment cuts on both ends! Appreciate the sentiment non the less. Hope you are doing well.
Date: 1/31/2025 11:01:00 AM
Congratulations, Edward! Your poem "A Sonnet for the Empress " has placed Second in my contest. Your poem stood out with its superb use of imagery and suggestive language. Very well done, my friend. Please Soupmail me to receive your prize.
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Edward Wraith
Date: 1/31/2025 12:32:00 PM
Oh wow! What an honor Emily. Thank you so much.
Date: 7/9/2024 10:37:00 AM
“ To love her is to court the fire of hell.” my beloved knows this too. Hah. This is brilliant and i love your title and the depth of this moving poem is truly soul touching!
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Date: 6/12/2024 5:46:00 AM
Edward, whoa there! That’s what i said upon reading rge last word of this fantastic poem! I just your descriptions for your work is filled with them and not a cliche anywhere! Your rhymes likewise. You are a wonderful writer! Hugs, sally
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Date: 5/24/2024 6:36:00 AM
Dear Edward, What a mesmerizing ode to the allure and mystery of the night empress. Your imagery vividly depicts her haunting beauty, draped in shadows and moonlight. I loved the language you've chosen which evokes a sense of enchantment and danger, capturing the essence of gothic romance. A very captivating piece—it's truly spellbinding. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Edward Wraith
Date: 5/24/2024 7:58:00 AM
Daniel, Your gracious words have cast a light upon my humble creation, illuminating its darkened corners with your kind praise. I am honored that my ode to the night empress resonated with you, and that the imagery of her haunting beauty draped in shadows and moonlight stirred your senses. The enchantment and danger of gothic romance are dear to my heart, and to know that they captured your imagination enlightens me. Thank you
Date: 5/23/2024 7:21:00 PM
Rhiannon? That's what came to mind anyway. Nice to meet a fellow sonneteer
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Edward Wraith
Date: 5/24/2024 8:00:00 AM
Ah, Rhiannon—a name that conjures the mystique of ancient lore and poetic inspiration. There is a whisper of Rhiannon in the cool night air. (What a great song from a legendary band) It’s a pleasure to connect with a fellow sonneteer. May our verses continue to weave tales of beauty and enchantment. Thank you Tom
Date: 5/23/2024 6:37:00 PM
' Her lips, a sinful shade. ' Sounds tempting, indeed. To taste her kiss and drown in her love, would be ' subtle bliss. ' So deep and dark, yet sensual and passionate, all at the same time. I'm breathless.
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Date: 5/24/2024 8:05:00 AM
I’m delighted to know her sinful shade has so ensnared you. To taste her tantalizing kiss and drown in her dark love is to surrender to a seductive symphony. The shadows and sensuality entwine, a dance of temptation and tender torment, weaving a web of subtle bliss. Thank you for losing yourself in the depths of my desire-laden words. Yours in dark delight, Edward

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