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A Sonnet For My Father On His Birthday

I’d write a rhyme to prove my depth of love Or sing angelic song like those above If gifts like these would prove love’s testament I’d give and give to prove deep sentiment But what to you, my Father, can I give? The one who taught me how to love and live What can I give you from this daughter’s heart? But vow that from your side I’ll never part You mean the world to me, this you must know With passing years my love for you does grow Your care for me is what helps see me through There is no other father sweet like you May Jesus grant you health and happiness This birthday wish I wrap in tenderness Eileen Manassian Ghali My daddy dearest turns 78 today...78! Where did all the years go??? My father is a pastor, an educator, and writer, but most of all, he is the best father in all the world. Yes, my My father has always been a very central figure in my life. I couldn't have hoped for a better dad. We've been close through the years, and I know that he is always there to catch me when I fall. Isn't that, after all, what our heavenly Father is like? I so love and adore my dad. If you'd like to "see" him, you can check my photos on my page here. :)

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Date: 3/16/2014 8:51:00 PM
Such a lucky girl you are and a lovely tribute for daddy my girl....MD
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Date: 3/13/2014 6:44:00 PM
A beautiful dedication..I am happy for you that you have a wonderful father sweet Eileen.Your heart is golden and your fatlher's must be a treasure trove...Happy Birthday Papa..love from Charma :.)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/14/2014 12:19:00 PM
Oh sweetie. My dad is larger than life to me. When I was younger, I thought his word was gospel. I see now he has his weaknesses too, but...don't we all. Yes, I am blessed. Thank you for your comment. Hugs, my dear sweet friend.
Date: 3/13/2014 9:26:00 AM
Hi Eileen, I hope you are having a great day.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/14/2014 12:19:00 PM
:) This is late, but better late than never. Today is just fine and dandy, thanks! :)
Date: 3/13/2014 8:41:00 AM
May I join to wish your father a Happy Birthday? What a better poem a daughter could write for her father? The best poem however for you father is YOU! May the Good Lord be generous and let your father live healthy for to be a hundred and more!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/14/2014 12:20:00 PM
You are ever kind to me, Demetri! God bless you. I so hope that he will be with me for a long time to come. I already lost my Mama 14 years ago....and even now...I haven't fully recovered. The Lord knows...Every day we live is written in His book before one of them came to be. I need to trust. Thank you! :)
Date: 3/12/2014 11:19:00 PM
Hello Eileen, you look very beautiful in your avatar:) A dear poem for your father. My dad is 77 or 78... his, birthday is coming up. I've never written him a poem. I might this year. thank you for the inspiration. xox~ Linda
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/14/2014 12:28:00 PM
Hey PD...Great to have a visit from you! I've changed my avatar since this post. Yea....I'm crazy about pics! Thanks for the compliment though. I'm sure your dad would love to have a poem from you! :) Thanks for the visit.
Date: 3/12/2014 9:04:00 PM
You are both so lucky to have such a wonderful close relationship Eileen. Many happy returns to your father - a fitting tribute in this wonderful poem. Jan x
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/14/2014 6:59:00 PM
Oh Eileen I smile the biggest smile ever when I log on and see P and a star by my name. I hope I can make the wonderful person proud, whoever it was who gave me this amazing gift.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/14/2014 12:30:00 PM
Jan...so sweet of you to visit and post this! Thanks ever so much. Yes, it is indeed a blessing. Will be by to visit soon! Hugs! BTW...congrats on the PM!
Date: 3/12/2014 7:29:00 PM
Wishing your dad a happy birthday, bowling eh, ten pin or lawn green? so you're a daddies girl are yer, as if we couldn't tell lol, So pleased you have the relationship you do. Take care, Richard
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/14/2014 12:32:00 PM
The first one....ten pin. :) Yes, I am a daddy's girl. He did spoil me, Richard...so, in a way, he does get some blame. I grew up thinking I'm a princess....life has taught me otherwise....Oh well, I love my Pappy, that's for sure! He's the bestest! Thanks for visiting.
Date: 3/12/2014 4:34:00 PM
Aww this is sweet, congratulations to your dad. I tried to respond to your post on my pantoum but the replys kept posting to Shadow. When you have a chance read the poem again it is now finished.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/12/2014 4:40:00 PM
On My WAY..........wait a minute wait a minute............WHO SAYS THAT????????? Oh...I know...It's Mr Lamoureux! ;)
Date: 3/12/2014 2:17:00 PM
I bet he is one proud papa . He has raised an outstanding daughter..Your tribute is outstanding ..... Tim
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/12/2014 2:21:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Tim. That's very sweet of you!
Date: 3/12/2014 2:13:00 PM
such a sweet and heartfelt tribute to your father, eileen... i lovvve this!.. huggs
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/12/2014 2:16:00 PM
Thanks, Nette....I Skyped with him earlier. He is having a grand old day. He loves bowling so...they are off bowling now..he, my step-mom, step-sis, and my daughter. Wish I could be in Cyprus celebrating with them. Thanks for the visit
Date: 3/12/2014 1:28:00 PM
What a warm, sincere dedication! Reading your reply to Honestly JT gives more than an indication of why there is such a close relationship between you and your father...you'll always be his baby girl...and a special one at that! May I join you in wishing him a happy birthday plus more of the same. [my other half has hers today ,too!] // paul
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/12/2014 1:31:00 PM
:) It's a special day all around then! :) Thanks for the lovely birthday wishes, Paul. Very sweet of you! May I wish your other half the same? :) You bring lots of joy with your visits. I think I have the gift of Barnabas...you are an encourager.....nothing finer than that. Hugs
Date: 3/12/2014 1:18:00 PM
Most wonderful tribute poem for your father Eileen!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/12/2014 1:19:00 PM
Thanks, Ken...he is a very special man in my life!!! :)
Date: 3/12/2014 12:56:00 PM
You have done it once again Eileen. I really enjoyed reading this heartfelt masterpiece. (7)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/12/2014 1:00:00 PM
Thanks, JT. I always love having visits from you! ;) Yes, my daddy really rocks! Of course, he did spoil me. Mom found out she was pregnant at 41. I was a SURPRISE! Mom and dad already had two rambunctious boys...so a little girl was sure to get lots of attention. :) I'm a daddy's girl alright! Thanks for the post...HUGS

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