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A Songbird's Trill

my muffled mind's cloaked in silence deaf to men's and merchant's chants tethered together with love's essence open to whispers of light's acceptance battling mirrors of inner cages wrestling wrongful images - constant accusations spontaneously hoisted by a single song bird's trill perched upon my window sill- a wonder still With dawn's emerging illumination I rise amongst the masked masses for 'now' is all I own or live for to offer the best of what I hope for

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/23/2016 9:33:00 PM

AnnaLinda, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Annalinda W.
Date: 6/25/2016 10:08:00 PM

Come to think of it...No thanks.

Annalinda W.
Date: 6/25/2016 4:09:00 PM

I'm pretty sure my "poetic skills" or lack thereof...can be seen.

Annalinda W.
Date: 6/24/2016 11:12:00 PM

Linda, Thank you so much for your welcome and offer for help. Of course I would always be open for help and critiques. Lord knows I could use it. I'm glad to have you as a new friend and look forward to reading more of your work. I am also a Linda...AnnaLinda here:)

Dave Timperley

Date: 6/21/2016 3:10:00 PM

A lovely Carpe Deum poem Anna. loved it. God Bless. D.

Annalinda W.
Date: 6/25/2016 5:57:00 AM

Dave, Thanks so much for your nice comment... glad you liked it. AnnaLinda

James Inman

Date: 6/19/2016 10:30:00 PM

Life exacts a heavy toll at times, but sometimes the simplest of events helps us to take a new look at who we are and gives us the strength and joy to continue on.

Annalinda W.
Date: 6/20/2016 9:20:00 AM

Thank you for your nice comment, James.

Skat A

Date: 6/19/2016 2:25:00 AM

Anna, Welcome aboard... you going to like it here. Skat

Annalinda W.
Date: 6/20/2016 9:19:00 AM

Thank you for your welcome, Skat