A Songbird's Ode To Autumns Gone

As winter's gloom  descends upon  the trees
Autumn slumbers  'neath the fallen leaves
Spring's distant dream is yet to be perceived
As trees  weep in the cold silence of  their grief

Autumn slumbers  'neath the fallen leaves
As a lone bird sings a melancholy song
The trees weep in the cold silence of  their grief
To a songbird's ode to autumns gone

As a lone bird sings a melancholy song
A sad song within my heart is born
As  I hear the songbird's ode to autumns gone
That echoes in the twilight until  morn

A sad song within my heart is born
As winter's frost  through the forest  spawns
The songbird's ode to autumn echoes until morn
Before it takes its envied flight to warmer dawns

As winter's frost through the forest spawns
Spring's distant dream is yet to be perceived
Then the songbird takes its envied flight to warmer dawns
As winter's gloom descends upon the trees 
                                      ~~

Joseph May
                                       

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Sands Avatar
August 12, 2017 at 2:34 PM
Very well written Pantoum this is Joseph. Excellent! I enjoyed it :)
Lamoureux Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 10:20 AM
I am congratulating you on your win in Linda's contest.
Mehta Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 9:36 AM
A wonderful poem, congrats on the win, joseph
Lamoureux Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 9:36 AM
Well done David.
May Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 10:00 AM
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A. Sharma Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 8:53 AM
Very well written Joseph! Congrats on great win !
A   Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 3:38 AM
JOSEPH, , Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest...:) LINDA
Walker  Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 3:10 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Joseph. Verlena
Phookan Avatar
February 13, 2014 at 6:35 AM
Nice poem! Congrats Joseph on your win!!!
Mehta Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 8:26 AM
A great write and congrats on the win, joseph
Kendrick Avatar
February 10, 2014 at 10:18 AM
Way to go with this awesome work..Sara
May Avatar
February 10, 2014 at 1:59 PM
Thank you Sara
Lamoureux Avatar
February 10, 2014 at 7:16 AM
Congratulations Joseph. I enjoyed the imagery.
May Avatar
February 10, 2014 at 1:57 PM
Thank you Richard
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 10, 2014 at 4:17 AM
Congratulations Joseph another great write xx
May Avatar
February 10, 2014 at 1:56 PM
Thank you Mandy
Oyewole Avatar
February 9, 2014 at 10:04 PM
It's a pleasure to have come across this gem of yours today, read and dropped by. Big congrats to you on your deserved win, Joseph! Well done!!
May Avatar
February 10, 2014 at 1:56 PM
Thank you AO...
Richards Avatar
February 9, 2014 at 7:37 PM
This is wonderful, Joseph......and you have honored Andrea by choosing one of hers to inspire you! Just lovely......congratulations!
May Avatar
February 9, 2014 at 7:44 PM
Thank you Carrie
Dietrich Avatar
February 9, 2014 at 6:18 PM
Yayyyyy, can you hear me clapping?? I am so happy this one is at the top!!
May Avatar
February 9, 2014 at 7:08 PM
I will return the applause to you for the inspiration....Yaaaay
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
January 25, 2014 at 6:29 AM
I love it! In case you didn't know, I live in the woods...and you have captured the emotion of the season. Very nice. Pantoum is one of my favorite forms of poetry and you have done a great job on this one. Good luck in the contest. I think you'll do well!
May Avatar
January 25, 2014 at 12:54 PM
Thank you Dane...I enjoyed your Pantoum about building castles ...hugs
Melugin Avatar
January 21, 2014 at 8:58 AM
The rhyme, the emotion, the change.the transcending, all bundled in greatness! Excellent Joseph! My best, chuck
May Avatar
January 21, 2014 at 3:06 PM
Thank you Chuck, I appreciate your comments
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January 20, 2014 at 3:32 AM
- So beautiful / touching that it gives me goosebumps, Joseph. - Luck i contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 11:00 PM
Thank you so much Anne..always a pleasure to see you...hugs
Guzzi Avatar
January 19, 2014 at 7:39 PM
A soft and sweet sorrow, well done. Light & Love
May Avatar
January 19, 2014 at 10:45 PM
Thank you Debbie...Always good to see you...Autumn's departure is but a soft sweet sorrow...
Dietrich Avatar
January 19, 2014 at 10:45 AM
Seeing it again. And glad how much Gail liked it!! thanks for choosing my poems as your inspiration, Joseph.
May Avatar
January 19, 2014 at 11:46 AM
Thank you Andrea..I am glad Gail loved it too..I think this is the 2nd time I've used one of your poems as inspiration for a contest..hugs
Henderson Avatar
January 18, 2014 at 10:36 AM
Very nice work on this poem Joseph. If for a contest I'm sure it will do well. I find them labor intensive, so i shy away.
May Avatar
January 18, 2014 at 7:21 PM
I think it all depends on how comfortable the writer is with the subject...Thank you for your comments Charles..much appreciated
Henderson Avatar
January 18, 2014 at 1:07 PM
It's been a year at least but I'm pretty sure there were some groups of subjects that do much better than others. You have me curious now. Will have to dwell on that a bit. b ut at my age I'm scared to dwell to long
May Avatar
January 18, 2014 at 12:40 PM
That is so true Charles..I should have planned my last stanza before I even wrote the second..and I had to do a lot of editting due to that lack of planning ..
Dietrich Avatar
January 18, 2014 at 3:37 AM
This is wonderful, Joseph!! yes, you captured the melancholy heart of it!! Always autumn makes me feel this way! (soupmail)
May Avatar
January 18, 2014 at 12:35 PM
Yes Autumn seems to have that effect on us.. .Thank you Andrea
Pettit Avatar
January 18, 2014 at 12:05 AM
Very descriptive with some admirable rhyming. A pleasure to read.
May Avatar
January 18, 2014 at 12:30 PM
Thank you Robert...I appreciate your comments
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