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A Songbird's Diet

In
   my backyard
are songbirds
aplenty
I feed them
               raisins;
And
   sweet berries
but they like worms better
with spiders
               to crunch;
But
     cold winter
         brings out murders
for today, a songbird killed
a fat mouse
             way too big
to carry home!

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November 11, 2019


Poetry/Light Verse/A Songbird's Diet
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Written for FTI Blog Series 25 - Food
Brian Strand

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Makama Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 8:55 AM
This is beautiful.. What a lovely poem.
La France Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 2:25 PM
Funom, thanks for visiting and for the beautiful and lovely !
Michael Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 7:20 AM
He'll have to be stored in the warehouse...A truth of Life
La France Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 8:48 AM
Arturo, thanks for visiting, I doubt birdie the murderer can ever carry his kill away ! Its almost as big as he is !
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 11, 2019 at 9:05 PM
Lol! ;D, xomo!
La France Avatar
November 11, 2019 at 9:25 PM
Maureen, thanks for the visit !
Poetry Avatar
November 11, 2019 at 3:47 PM
Quite the feat for the little guy
La France Avatar
November 11, 2019 at 9:24 PM
TS, thanks for visiting, yes, that's a bit big for a tiny bird !
Allison Avatar
November 11, 2019 at 2:20 PM
oh gosh Constance I have never seen such a tiny bird catch a souse it must have been desperately hungry! Very descriptive poem my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
November 11, 2019 at 2:25 PM
Jan, thanks for the visit and the compliment and hugs, poor wee bird looks so confused about what to do next !
Toney Avatar
November 11, 2019 at 11:19 AM
Constance, you've got a lot going on in your back yard, yeah? :) I love the last stanza along with the image! A Fav for me. ~Mark
La France Avatar
November 11, 2019 at 12:47 PM
Mark, I see nature everywhere around my home, my dad taught me to see with eyes that speak, I love that image too, you can see birdie thinking, now that I killed it how to heck do I get it home !
Krutsinger Avatar
November 11, 2019 at 9:50 AM
Oohhhh Great imagery; the photo makes it insanely clever, Constance.
La France Avatar
November 11, 2019 at 12:45 PM
Caren, thanks so much for visiting and for the great comment !
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