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A Song For Lunar Lovers

O' crescent moon I truly adore you so Even the full moon upon the shore you know Art' thee poetically made of cream white ivory or maybe marble or like cheese in the story? When my day not my sky is blue Cradle me in your crescent won't you? If rock you are upon which we can stand pray sprinkle me your moonlit sand Stardust if it makes me sail and fly high up to you In your curved crescent canoe, a dream come true You do rock, you rocky terrain way up there All sad souls rock them then In your swingy arching chair In all the shapes and sizes that your sheen may show Your Creator's artsy, creative magnificence In designing even thy reflected luminescence Dear God take a bow, for to Him alone I bow Ah, glory be to God for thy diamond glow. Crooning a song for any fervent lunar lovers like me Join me in thanking the One Deity for all luminosity. For this luminous nocturnal boon we know fondly as the Moon Moonlight, moonshine the most poetic glow May moonlight through my windows flow O' crescent moon you are the symbol of mankind's well wisher religion May darkness heed what your light symbolises, And realise, acknowledge and follow the one true God's opinion.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/7/2021 7:20:00 PM
Yes the moon our natual saterlight love the moon and stars the astronamy and mythology side beatiful writr very dream like xx
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Date: 12/15/2019 7:39:00 AM
Quite an ambitious poem, that travels from one lover, more lovers, and the One Lover who is Creator. Liked it zaynab.
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Date: 7/1/2019 12:23:00 PM
Lovely read!
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Date: 3/23/2019 1:10:00 AM
Beautiful tribute to the moon which is admired and honoured in different ways across the globe. Well done...I love your poetic discourse. :) Sunita UPD
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Date: 3/8/2019 6:51:00 PM
I have an astronomy background and have always been fascinated by the moon, either observing it with the unaided eye or examining the many features that mark its surface. I am especially intrigued by the very thin crescent moon that either follows or precedes new moon. The sooner the thinner the better. Your poem rolls rhyme, romance and rhythm all into one delightful offering. Thank you so much for posting it.
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 3/14/2019 12:07:00 AM
Thanks soo much for a delightful great comment. Astronomy background wow nice to know sir!
Date: 3/8/2019 1:33:00 PM
Beautiful; the moon is truly a wondrous celestial being. Well penned.
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 3/14/2019 12:08:00 AM
Yay, thanks soo much for all comments poet/poetess.. Best wishes.
Date: 2/13/2019 12:46:00 PM
Give thanks indeed. Such a beautifully visual poem S.zaynab!
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Date: 2/11/2019 4:31:00 AM
Lovely romantic expression. Lots of imagery which i loved. Thanks for sharing this. :) Sunita
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Date: 1/4/2019 9:59:00 PM
Great lunar loves; alas ... i simply need rain for romance & romantic escapades. You almost persuade me, though ... Salaam and shanthi Om (Yadon ki Baraath)
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 1/5/2019 12:01:00 AM
Yes both moon n rain are poetically romantic. Ok happy new yr poet.
Date: 1/4/2019 9:59:00 PM
Happy 2019
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Date: 12/31/2018 8:58:00 AM
Hi Zaynab, The moon, always shining down on us, such feelings of love take me when her beauty caresses me. A song sung for her glory. An excellent write my friend. Your wonderful lines sing such wonderful imagery. What beauty your words do sing. A wonderful tribute to Heaven's glory, she we call the moon. Have a very Happy New Year. Hugs....Mike. XX
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 12/31/2018 11:23:00 PM
Wow what a wonderful poetic comment, a very happy new year to u too poet!
Date: 12/25/2018 7:09:00 PM
The Moon is a magnificent being, full of warm light and mystery. Beautiful words you've penned for her.
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 12/26/2018 12:56:00 AM
Wow glad to see the moon being referred to in the feminine, pleases my feminine pride,. Warmest thanks fellow poetess/poet n happy new yr wishes .
Date: 12/25/2018 12:20:00 PM
Last night I supped on the beauty of a glowing moon-- and not once in 71years have I tired of such food! Nicely done, and I especially like the last stanza.
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 12/26/2018 12:55:00 AM
Wow that proves you are a great poet at heart, how u ravish the moon, . Thanks for a witty comment, happy hols n new yr wishes to yah
Date: 12/24/2018 2:18:00 AM
A beautiful tribute to love of moon. Who is your moon in life When my day not my sky is blue Cradle me in your crescent won't you?
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 12/25/2018 11:29:00 PM
Thanks so much for comment, this is just about the moon as a heavenly body and not referring to any other thing else. Happy hols n new yr wishes.
Date: 12/23/2018 9:39:00 PM
Zaynab, a breathtaking tribute to the moon. I truly enjoyed the wondrous imagery that inspirits your poem and sweeps me up and away to the curved crescent canoe itself. A beautiful creation, both the moon and your poem, my friend. Warmest wishes for a joyous holiday season.. ~Susan
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 12/23/2018 10:43:00 PM
Aw my warmest thanks for such a delightful comment, an so glad it whisked u off to the crescent canoe of dreams yayy. Wishing u the merriest Xmas! And new yr too.
Date: 12/23/2018 3:17:00 PM
The lunar lady is lovely in all her phases. You celebrate her beauty and our Creator in this magnificent poem Zaynab! Christmas Blessings to you and your family! : ) xxoo
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 12/23/2018 10:42:00 PM
My warmest thanks for such a great nice comment and wishes. Wow nice to know the moon is a lunar lady eh. Merry Xmas friend. :)
Date: 12/23/2018 9:47:00 AM
Zaynab, so beautifully penned and dreamy, I love your write a lot, well done dear poet ~
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 12/23/2018 10:40:00 PM
Warmest thanks for lovely comment. Happy new yr wishes!
Date: 12/23/2018 6:47:00 AM
A soothing, divine ambiance! refined sentiments.. stunning imagery in tune with an adept poetess, a sensitive poetic heart, a brilliant soaring imagination! A great pleasure to read Zaynab.. Warmest wishes for a Happy New Year.. God bless you.
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 12/23/2018 10:39:00 PM
My warmest thanks dear for a lovely review . God bless and happy new yr wishes to u too.
Date: 12/23/2018 5:42:00 AM
A lovely verse my friend...God's gifts...love & light...^WW^
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 12/23/2018 10:36:00 PM
Yes God's gifts yay, warmest thanks for nice comment. Happy hols n new yr wishes!
Date: 12/23/2018 2:37:00 AM
so gloriously rendered, S...praises for more happiness this christmas season!..huggs
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 12/23/2018 10:35:00 PM
Warmest thanks nette and merry Xmas
Date: 12/22/2018 10:35:00 PM
Wonderful! Yet, the last word, opinion should be replaced with Law or something like that. Personal view. Very glad to meet you and read you. Have a wonder day.
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 12/23/2018 12:43:00 AM
Thanks soo much for your nice comment and opinion. Hmm, law wouldn't rhyme with religion neh bro/sir. Ok have a great new yr ahead!
Date: 12/22/2018 7:54:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful--a moving tribute to the moon and its Almighty Creator! Janice
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 12/23/2018 12:39:00 AM
Aw warmest thanks for such sweet feedback, I get so emotional n happy when people acknowledge the Creator. Warm happy new yr wishes n merry Xmas.!
Date: 12/22/2018 5:00:00 PM
Quite lovely images!
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 12/23/2018 12:36:00 AM
Warm thanks and happy new yr wishes to yah!
Date: 12/22/2018 4:41:00 PM
I love the moon and its beautiful moonlight rays, You say it so well, Thanks for sharing lovely poetry, dear poet
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 12/23/2018 12:35:00 AM
Warmest thanks fellow poetess for a moonlit comment! Happy hols n new yr wishes.
Date: 12/22/2018 1:41:00 PM
Beautifully written! Thanks for sharing :)
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 12/23/2018 12:32:00 AM
Warmest thanks n happy new yr in advance!
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