Audrey Haick Poet Rhyme

A Soft Kiss

As the sun plants a soft kiss, good bye 
And leaves its imprint upon an evening sky
Rich reds, soft pink and violet hues
At times observed by oh, so few

He marks the path for sister moon
For he knows that she will follow soon
Countless stars accompanying her, shine ever bright!
Across galaxies afar this coming night

All creatures alive must stop their toil
Seek rest, refresh and humbly extol
What child-like wonder and surprise, this brings
As captured is the perfect song that nature sings!
~*~
Annalise Brigham
7/20/10

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Joseph May August 19, 2013 at 4:55 AM wonderful write Annalise....hugs

Poet Destroyer A April 24, 2013 at 7:29 PM Annalise, congratulations with your poem on Andrea's, favorite list. always~ Linda

Tahera Mannan April 22, 2013 at 10:52 PM So sweet and soft. Many congrats dear friend.

Joseph May April 22, 2013 at 8:49 PM congrats on a fine win Annalise

Andrea Dietrich July 15, 2010 at 8:55 PM I was scrolling down and remembered this beautiful poem of yours. A fav for THIS one, Audrey!

Kevin Semeniuk July 15, 2010 at 4:47 PM loved this!..such great visuals you've created!!

Richard-Jamaal Keen July 13, 2010 at 10:15 AM Wow sis! I though only I felt this way about kiss, let alone a sunset! Congrats on your win, and speakin of that, we should try doing a co-write if you won't mind, even though I truly feel I can't keep up with you!

Carol Sunshine Brown July 12, 2010 at 11:24 AM Congratulations Audrey on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Heaven Sent Smiles". Love, Carol

James Fraser July 12, 2010 at 11:23 AM Wonderful capture in your words on the picture in Carolyn's contest, it's beautifully written >> James

Dr.Ram Mehta July 11, 2010 at 9:23 PM Congrats on the 6th place win, Audrey

Andrea Dietrich July 11, 2010 at 5:11 PM Soft and romantic writing in this entry, Audrey. Congratulations on your win!

John Freeman July 11, 2010 at 3:32 PM Congratulations, Audrey, on your poem's success in the contest. Agape, Moses

Joyce Johnson July 11, 2010 at 3:20 PM Lovely indeed. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Amy Green July 11, 2010 at 1:17 PM Exquisite... love this.

Carolyn Devonshire July 11, 2010 at 11:57 AM Love the imagery, especially the sun planting "a soft kiss," Audrey. Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Daver Austin July 11, 2010 at 10:32 AM Night song. Love this write, Audrey...very melodic and smooth. Love, Dave

Gert W. Knop July 11, 2010 at 10:26 AM Beautifully written and impressive, Audrey...And thank you for your kind comments!...Love, Gert

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen July 11, 2010 at 5:15 AM Nature is so beautiful, Audrey. Your appreciation and love for God's wonderful world are beautifully written in this poem. NOTE: Did I tell you that I am going to try to start commenting again? I have just been too weepy these past three months…commenting became difficult. Thanks for understanding. God be with you. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Tarek Al Sabouni July 11, 2010 at 1:47 AM beautiful .. thumbs up

Wilma Neels July 11, 2010 at 12:37 AM Audrey, I just love the tranquility this piece takes me to.. Enjoy it tremendously, luv Wilma

Carrie Richards July 10, 2010 at 6:00 PM Oh, how lovely is this one!! Is this a contest? It should be...I hope you have entered it in the Luna Goddess contest!! It is just lovely! ~ Carrie