Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

A Snowy Morning

Snowflakes adorn blurry morn, gently, gently trickling down 
As salted streets are turning brown across this weary town
While tilting trees blow wheeze of breeze in throe of snow
In aerial dance of wintry woe, as tips of twigs sun rays glow.

Driving slowly, traffic is moving, blinkers brightly turning on
As somber day, bearing yawn, is awakening bleak and drawn
When kids thrilled, frolic and build, a snowman on their lawn
Celebrating school closings on this messy, dampened dawn.

Peering scenes tinted gold, hushed romantic gazes behold
Fixating on meadows bold, where pristine paintings unfold
Delighting in the glowing blaze that brightens daze of malaise
Appealing to zeal of morning, blushing haze in emergent rays.

A deer ambles besides her fawn, exiting her quiet hideout
Curious to scout how leisurely strollers are sauntering about,
Ruminating sunshine while darkened clouds are phasing out
As bluing skies, sparkle eyes, illuminating zest of astral clout.

Beyond foothills, tall cliffs sigh, scintillating in sapphire sky
When far from here, climbing up high, cerulean motifs vie
As cobalt imprints horizons amplify, where birds merrily fly
Announcing to the receding storm: it’s time to say goodbye.

When daylight quivers on melting mound of thawing ground
Amidst whispers swirling around, muffled wind’s hissing sound;
Golden glints thrill, glistening hill, tinting the landscapes blue
Refracting puddles in ornate view of glinted beams’ opal hue.

November 16, 2020
Poem of the day on November 18, 2020
Placed 1st: In rhymes sublime poetry contest--by Joseph May

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Valsa George May 22, 2022 at 2:46 AM This is simply brilliant....! I agree with John Hamilton's comment.... ! You are taking a step higher with each poem . Continue your victorious poetic journey, dear friend !

Mystic Rose Rose November 22, 2020 at 9:53 AM Dear Vijay, as it turns out we are having our very first snow fall here, lol, and what a pretty sight it is. Your words are so well penned, it was a pleasure to read it. Symmetrically successful. Have a blessed day dear poet friend. Vijay Pandit November 22, 2020 at 5:10 PM Thank you my friend--much appreciate.

Joanna Daniel November 22, 2020 at 2:00 AM An astounding poem of beauty, Vijay:) congratulations on your first place win:) Vijay Pandit November 22, 2020 at 5:10 PM Thank you Jo.

Paula Goldsmith November 21, 2020 at 8:52 AM Congratulations on your POTD win. WOW!!! what a wonderful and creative write. Your pen was working overtime on this one. Have a wonderful weekend........ Vijay Pandit November 21, 2020 at 10:34 AM Much appreciate, Paula--many thanks.

Janice Canerdy November 21, 2020 at 8:35 AM No wonder this poem placed first and garnered POTD, Vijay. It's a masterpiece!! Janice Vijay Pandit November 21, 2020 at 10:34 AM Thank you Janice--much appreciate.

Sandra Adams November 21, 2020 at 8:14 AM you always paint the scenes so wonderfully and take us there... congratulations on your potd and win with this beauty... glad it is one of the first poems that i read upon my visit today... gorgeous poetry Vijay... hugs Vijay Pandit November 21, 2020 at 10:33 AM Thank you Sandy. Welcome back--much appreciate, as always.

Sam Kauffman November 20, 2020 at 10:18 AM Back with congratulations Vijay. You really have captured that hypnotic experience of falling snow and the end of the storm. Enjoyed your magical lines. Vijay Pandit November 20, 2020 at 10:21 AM Much appreciate your return visit--many thanks, Sam.

Connie Marcum Wong November 20, 2020 at 12:16 AM Your poem is just gorgeous Vijay. From the glorious imagery to the vivid colors and sublime scenes. Congratulations on having this lovely poem honored for POTD. I am sure it was highly awarded in the contest as well. Blessings xxoo Vijay Pandit November 20, 2020 at 4:45 AM Thank you Connie. I'm glad to see you again. Much appreciate your kind remarks--many many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich November 19, 2020 at 5:51 PM A very well deserved win, Vijay. Big Congrats to you. Vijay Pandit November 20, 2020 at 4:44 AM Much appreciate Andrea--many thanks.

Jennifer Proxenos November 19, 2020 at 11:07 AM Vijay my friend, congratulations, your vivid imagination once again is superb and your creative spirit soars. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Vijay Pandit November 20, 2020 at 4:43 AM Thank you Jennifer--much appreciate.

Joseph May November 19, 2020 at 8:54 AM "When daylight quivers on melting mound of thawing ground", beautiful write Vijay, Congrats on your win.... Vijay Pandit November 20, 2020 at 4:43 AM Much appreciate Joseph--many thanks.

Linda Alice Fowler November 19, 2020 at 8:07 AM Back to say congratulations on the win Vijay! Linda Vijay Pandit November 20, 2020 at 4:42 AM Thank you Linda.

Besma Riabi Dziri November 19, 2020 at 2:19 AM What a morning! What a stunning painting of a so wonderful scenery painted by the brush of a highly talented artist and drawn by the pen of great poet! So much relished in such a beauty! Congratulations, dear Vijay, on your POTD honour! Well earned a recognition! Really a sublime poetry worthy of all the acknowledgement and outshining placement. My deepest regards and blessings. Vijay Pandit November 19, 2020 at 4:31 AM Haven't seen much of your lately. Hope all is well, Besma. Always a joy to read your feedback. Much appreciate, as always. Many thanks. Regards.

Rama Balasubramanian November 18, 2020 at 7:19 PM This is soo beautiful... Congratulations Vijay. I can never write anything even close to this. Tell me one thing, did this flow from within automatically or you had to sit long hours to do it? It's just amazing. Right choice for potd. Enjoy your honour friend Vijay Pandit November 19, 2020 at 4:29 AM The scene described in this poem I see during winter season in my town, so the framework of the poem was easy to write. I am never happy with the first draft, so I read and edit for tone and flow. Sitting long hours never productive for me--I just edit with every new read. Much appreciate your kind thoughts, Rama. Many thanks for your visit and comments.

L Milton Hankins November 18, 2020 at 6:57 PM Congratulations on POTD. Superb job, well-written. Many lovely images that facilitate meditation. Thanks! Vijay Pandit November 19, 2020 at 4:24 AM Thank you for your visit and comments. Much appreciate your feedback.

Angela Crabtree November 18, 2020 at 5:34 PM "Refracting puddles in ornate view of glinted beams’ opal hue"... A brilliant ending to a brilliant poem :) Vijay Pandit November 19, 2020 at 4:23 AM Thank you Angela--much appreciate.

Brandy Nicole November 18, 2020 at 5:16 PM Like the sun smiles on the falling snow. I am smiling as well. Congratulations Vijay, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit November 19, 2020 at 4:23 AM Thank you for your return visit--much appreciate, Brandy.

Maria Williams November 18, 2020 at 3:59 PM What a lovely poem. You take your reader on the journey from start to end with the sublime use of descriptive wording. Congratulations on POTD my dear Vijay....Maria Hugs Vijay Pandit November 19, 2020 at 4:22 AM Glad to see you again, Maria. Much appreciate your vote of approval--many thanks my friend.

Liam Mcdaid November 18, 2020 at 3:22 PM congratulations very beautifully piece vijay a gem thawing amidst whispers i pray you have a blessed week ahead Vijay Pandit November 18, 2020 at 3:49 PM Much appreciate the kind remarks, Liam--many thanks for your visit and comments.

Sam Kauffman November 18, 2020 at 1:28 PM Just like I remember them, Vijay. This only happened two or three time a year but they left their indelible imprint in my memory. Beautiful, creative imagery that tells the story. So happy to see this as a POTD! Congratulations my friend! Vijay Pandit November 20, 2020 at 10:21 AM Thank you Sam--much appreciate your kind remarks.

Kim Rodrigues November 18, 2020 at 1:21 PM So happy you got POTD for this! Yay! Vijay Pandit November 20, 2020 at 10:20 AM Thank you Kim--much appreciate.

John Watt November 18, 2020 at 12:48 PM So many delightful rhymes and images of a snowy morning, Vijay. Congratulations on your POTD honor. Enjoy your day ~ John Vijay Pandit November 20, 2020 at 10:20 AM Much appreciate John--many thanks.

Heidi Sands November 18, 2020 at 10:10 AM Congratulations for your well deserved win of POTD Vijay :) Vijay Pandit November 18, 2020 at 10:30 AM Much appreciate your return visit Heidi--many thanks, as always.

Akkina Downing November 18, 2020 at 8:56 AM Congratulations on your POTD, Vijay :) Vijay Pandit November 18, 2020 at 10:29 AM Much appreciate Akkina--many thanks for your return visit.

Eve Roper November 18, 2020 at 8:41 AM Vijay, congratulations on POTD with this gem. Hugs Eve Vijay Pandit November 18, 2020 at 8:50 AM Much appreciate Eve--many many thanks.

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