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A Snowy Morning

Snowflakes adorn blurry morn, gently, gently trickling down As salted streets are turning brown across this weary town While tilting trees blow wheeze of breeze in throe of snow In aerial dance of wintry woe, as tips of twigs sun rays glow. Driving slowly, traffic is moving, blinkers brightly turning on As somber day, bearing yawn, is awakening bleak and drawn When kids thrilled, frolic and build, a snowman on their lawn Celebrating school closings on this messy, dampened dawn. Peering scenes tinted gold, hushed romantic gazes behold Fixating on meadows bold, where pristine paintings unfold Delighting in the glowing blaze that brightens daze of malaise Appealing to zeal of morning, blushing haze in emergent rays. A deer ambles besides her fawn, exiting her quiet hideout Curious to scout how leisurely strollers are sauntering about, Ruminating sunshine while darkened clouds are phasing out As bluing skies, sparkle eyes, illuminating zest of astral clout. Beyond foothills, tall cliffs sigh, scintillating in sapphire sky When far from here, climbing up high, cerulean motifs vie As cobalt imprints horizons amplify, where birds merrily fly Announcing to the receding storm: it’s time to say goodbye. When daylight quivers on melting mound of thawing ground Amidst whispers swirling around, muffled wind’s hissing sound; Golden glints thrill, glistening hill, tinting the landscapes blue Refracting puddles in ornate view of glinted beams’ opal hue. November 16, 2020 Poem of the day on November 18, 2020 Placed 1st: In rhymes sublime poetry contest--by Joseph May

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Date: 5/22/2022 2:46:00 AM
This is simply brilliant....! I agree with John Hamilton's comment.... ! You are taking a step higher with each poem . Continue your victorious poetic journey, dear friend !
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Date: 11/22/2020 9:53:00 AM
Dear Vijay, as it turns out we are having our very first snow fall here, lol, and what a pretty sight it is. Your words are so well penned, it was a pleasure to read it. Symmetrically successful. Have a blessed day dear poet friend.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/22/2020 5:10:00 PM
Thank you my friend--much appreciate.
Date: 11/22/2020 2:00:00 AM
An astounding poem of beauty, Vijay:) congratulations on your first place win:)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/22/2020 5:10:00 PM
Thank you Jo.
Date: 11/21/2020 8:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. WOW!!! what a wonderful and creative write. Your pen was working overtime on this one. Have a wonderful weekend........
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/21/2020 10:34:00 AM
Much appreciate, Paula--many thanks.
Date: 11/21/2020 8:35:00 AM
No wonder this poem placed first and garnered POTD, Vijay. It's a masterpiece!! Janice
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Date: 11/21/2020 10:34:00 AM
Thank you Janice--much appreciate.
Date: 11/21/2020 8:14:00 AM
you always paint the scenes so wonderfully and take us there... congratulations on your potd and win with this beauty... glad it is one of the first poems that i read upon my visit today... gorgeous poetry Vijay... hugs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/21/2020 10:33:00 AM
Thank you Sandy. Welcome back--much appreciate, as always.
Date: 11/20/2020 10:18:00 AM
Back with congratulations Vijay. You really have captured that hypnotic experience of falling snow and the end of the storm. Enjoyed your magical lines.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/20/2020 10:21:00 AM
Much appreciate your return visit--many thanks, Sam.
Date: 11/20/2020 12:16:00 AM
Your poem is just gorgeous Vijay. From the glorious imagery to the vivid colors and sublime scenes. Congratulations on having this lovely poem honored for POTD. I am sure it was highly awarded in the contest as well. Blessings xxoo
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/20/2020 4:45:00 AM
Thank you Connie. I'm glad to see you again. Much appreciate your kind remarks--many many thanks.
Date: 11/19/2020 5:51:00 PM
A very well deserved win, Vijay. Big Congrats to you.
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Date: 11/20/2020 4:44:00 AM
Much appreciate Andrea--many thanks.
Date: 11/19/2020 11:07:00 AM
Vijay my friend, congratulations, your vivid imagination once again is superb and your creative spirit soars. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/20/2020 4:43:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer--much appreciate.
Date: 11/19/2020 8:54:00 AM
"When daylight quivers on melting mound of thawing ground", beautiful write Vijay, Congrats on your win....
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Date: 11/20/2020 4:43:00 AM
Much appreciate Joseph--many thanks.
Date: 11/19/2020 8:07:00 AM
Back to say congratulations on the win Vijay! Linda
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/20/2020 4:42:00 AM
Thank you Linda.
Date: 11/19/2020 2:19:00 AM
What a morning! What a stunning painting of a so wonderful scenery painted by the brush of a highly talented artist and drawn by the pen of great poet! So much relished in such a beauty! Congratulations, dear Vijay, on your POTD honour! Well earned a recognition! Really a sublime poetry worthy of all the acknowledgement and outshining placement. My deepest regards and blessings.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/19/2020 4:31:00 AM
Haven't seen much of your lately. Hope all is well, Besma. Always a joy to read your feedback. Much appreciate, as always. Many thanks. Regards.
Date: 11/18/2020 7:19:00 PM
This is soo beautiful... Congratulations Vijay. I can never write anything even close to this. Tell me one thing, did this flow from within automatically or you had to sit long hours to do it? It's just amazing. Right choice for potd. Enjoy your honour friend
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/19/2020 4:29:00 AM
The scene described in this poem I see during winter season in my town, so the framework of the poem was easy to write. I am never happy with the first draft, so I read and edit for tone and flow. Sitting long hours never productive for me--I just edit with every new read. Much appreciate your kind thoughts, Rama. Many thanks for your visit and comments.
Date: 11/18/2020 6:57:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD. Superb job, well-written. Many lovely images that facilitate meditation. Thanks!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/19/2020 4:24:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and comments. Much appreciate your feedback.
Date: 11/18/2020 5:34:00 PM
"Refracting puddles in ornate view of glinted beams’ opal hue"... A brilliant ending to a brilliant poem :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/19/2020 4:23:00 AM
Thank you Angela--much appreciate.
Date: 11/18/2020 5:16:00 PM
Like the sun smiles on the falling snow. I am smiling as well. Congratulations Vijay, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/19/2020 4:23:00 AM
Thank you for your return visit--much appreciate, Brandy.
Date: 11/18/2020 3:59:00 PM
What a lovely poem. You take your reader on the journey from start to end with the sublime use of descriptive wording. Congratulations on POTD my dear Vijay....Maria Hugs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/19/2020 4:22:00 AM
Glad to see you again, Maria. Much appreciate your vote of approval--many thanks my friend.
Date: 11/18/2020 3:22:00 PM
congratulations very beautifully piece vijay a gem thawing amidst whispers i pray you have a blessed week ahead
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/18/2020 3:49:00 PM
Much appreciate the kind remarks, Liam--many thanks for your visit and comments.
Date: 11/18/2020 1:58:00 PM
Congrats on your POTD for this well-rhymed expression of winter elements, right down to the last image "opal hue." Lovely.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/18/2020 3:49:00 PM
Thank you Carol--much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 11/18/2020 1:28:00 PM
Just like I remember them, Vijay. This only happened two or three time a year but they left their indelible imprint in my memory. Beautiful, creative imagery that tells the story. So happy to see this as a POTD! Congratulations my friend!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/20/2020 10:21:00 AM
Thank you Sam--much appreciate your kind remarks.
Date: 11/18/2020 1:21:00 PM
So happy you got POTD for this! Yay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/20/2020 10:20:00 AM
Thank you Kim--much appreciate.
Date: 11/18/2020 12:48:00 PM
So many delightful rhymes and images of a snowy morning, Vijay. Congratulations on your POTD honor. Enjoy your day ~ John
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/20/2020 10:20:00 AM
Much appreciate John--many thanks.
Date: 11/18/2020 10:10:00 AM
Congratulations for your well deserved win of POTD Vijay :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/18/2020 10:30:00 AM
Much appreciate your return visit Heidi--many thanks, as always.
Date: 11/18/2020 8:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Vijay :)
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Date: 11/18/2020 10:29:00 AM
Much appreciate Akkina--many thanks for your return visit.
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