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These woods once rich with leaves, brushed kiss from the wind then stolen by thieves now latent bow by snow. Its touch glistening glow melt tears, I think I know to watch allurement flow its caress weaves. Sun makes its way across the sky sinks out of reach and wins the toss. A peace in the wood walls, stunning, once the night falls, nocturnal creature calls. Different kinds of loveliness emboss. Dazzling glow, eyes of light, a sea of darkness, stars winking good night while nature falls asleep, and nighthawks rise to peep. Cold threaded fingers keep on snowy evening walk, no one in sight. Snowflakes resume to flow, these woods within our grasp such wealth of snow. The only sound's, the graze of chilled wind wounds and raise the fall of flakes that lays. On a snowy evening walk tempting so. 12/25/2017

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Date: 3/2/2018 7:33:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Eve. Beautiful. Well done.
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Date: 2/28/2018 8:10:00 PM
Returning with congratulations Eve, for your wonderful win with your beautiful poem..
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Date: 2/28/2018 11:05:00 AM
I loved this contest by BW, you did it perfectly! thank you and congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 1/14/2018 7:34:00 PM
Just beautiful Eve!! Congratuations on your so well deserved First place win!!! ~Judy
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Date: 1/12/2018 1:33:00 PM
Eve, I am back to congratulate you on your First Place win! You already know how much I thought of this beauty because of my Fave! Cheers, Connie
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Date: 1/12/2018 8:22:00 AM
Lovely Eve, congratulations on a very deserving win...
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Date: 1/12/2018 8:10:00 AM
Way to go Eve! A deserving top placement.
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Date: 1/12/2018 7:51:00 AM
Eve, you process a poetic soul that breathes magic into your words. Your word choices are clever, descriptive, and imaginative. The words flow with style and skill while soliciting further contemplation, congratulations on your well deserved win my friend, Emile.
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Date: 1/12/2018 7:39:00 AM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my contest ! It is obvious to me that you worked very hard on this poem to create these beautiful lines and your hard work has been recognized.
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Date: 1/12/2018 6:20:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win Eve
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Date: 1/12/2018 5:25:00 AM
sooooo beautiful sweet Eve! Congrats on your well deserved top win ;)-luloo
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Date: 1/12/2018 3:24:00 AM
It's a cracker, congratulations Eve, a well-deserved win! loads of hugs... Mick
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Date: 1/12/2018 1:12:00 AM
Congratulations, Eve on your first position win.
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Date: 1/11/2018 11:52:00 PM
BIG CONGRATS to win top on your wonderful poem. Enjoyed every line and rhythm,but most enjoyed the third stanza. love
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Date: 1/11/2018 10:27:00 PM
Wonderful rhythm. Congrats on your top win, Eve.
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Date: 12/30/2017 6:53:00 PM
Eve my friend, I thank you so much for making my day feel cool, how I would love that at the moment, it is so damn hot here, this is one beautiful poem, you certainly do have a way with words, you describe everything to a tee, keep them coming and take care......Vera
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Date: 12/28/2017 4:04:00 PM
Great. God had me make this response. My Poems Not Fade Away Am blinded by bright light God made, In His son, so I will sit in the shade; And pray, Without delay; My poems away won't let them fade. Jim Horn
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Date: 12/27/2017 12:14:00 PM
I love this Eve! Somehow it brought on the tears. A Fave my friend! : )
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Date: 12/27/2017 7:42:00 AM
Oh, this is lovely, Eve. You paint a wonderful picture.
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Date: 12/26/2017 9:45:00 PM
Beautiful write Eve...nice rhyme scheme
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Date: 12/26/2017 6:22:00 AM
Wow... This is so beautiful Eve... I loved it... Reads like a winner... Thanks for sharing this lovely poem...
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Date: 12/26/2017 5:00:00 AM
Lovely imagery and great flow to your poem... Rhymes very well...
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Date: 12/26/2017 1:45:00 AM
absolutely enchanting Eve I think Constance will love this charming poem:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/25/2017 7:59:00 PM
A radiant and enchanting write Eve. Your imagery is luminous and your rhymes shine. This was a wonderful joy to read this Christmas evening Best wishes for a win!
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Date: 12/25/2017 7:55:00 PM
Simply beautiful! Awesome imagery and well crafted rhymes.
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