A Smudge

a teeny-tiny insect-type smudge smeared on a bathroom tile the killer walked away free

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Quoth Theraven

Date: 4/4/2021 9:34:00 AM

Gershon, It happens just that way as your vision described. I set one free just this morning. The little changes, was it cause and effect? -Richard

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/4/2021 7:23:00 PM

Could be that it the smudge was 'effectively caused,' at any rate. Cheers, Richard. :) gw

Judy Ball

Date: 4/2/2021 1:54:00 PM

Happy Easter! He Is Risen!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/4/2021 7:23:00 PM

Happy Easter, Judy! :) gw

Judy Ball

Date: 4/2/2021 1:52:00 PM

.Excellent Gershon. Really good imagery here. Seen it before in my bathroom. Those itsy tinsy spiders that come in in the early spring. OOOooooooooo! Good job. God Bless, JB

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/2/2021 3:05:00 PM

As long as no spider sat down beside you! :) gw

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/2/2021 11:49:00 AM

Hi Gershon, I can’t stand those things.I like style and creativity. Well done. Welcome back my friend:-) Alexis

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/2/2021 3:09:00 PM

Yeah. Those silly bugs aren't very stylish or creative. Ever since the great DDT 'spray-away' in the '60-'s. lol.