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A Smile In My Morning

A tease on the wings of summer's breeze A tickle in the touch of whispering winds A glimpse at the art of museum paintings A stare in the eyes of flowering spring-- A poem is a song of my innermost feelings. When I'm lost in confines of my thoughts Solace I seek from brilliant cosmic stars Prodding for answers to question marks Uncovering truth in words of a paradox, As the beat of poetry reignites my heart. Verses I compose in fragrance of Jasmines Linger merrily around blossoms of roses Listening to voices of fluttering tree leaves Soliciting rhymes from elate vocabulary, Evoking the cadence of rhythmic melodies. A giggle in a stream, a smile in my morning A romantic kiss in the splendor of evening An aesthetic dream in my night's revelry A lonesome tear of my un-consoled grief-- My poetry's the answer to call of my musings. February 23, 2019 Poem of the day on February 25, 2019 Placed first: Contest #570 by Brian Strand Placed first: Poetry and me contest by Silent One

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Valsa George

Date: 3/14/2022 4:37:00 AM

"Verses I compose in fragrance of Jasmines. Linger merrily around blossoms of roses"- Vijay, your poetry has the sparkling white radiance and the invading fragrance of jasmine flowers. Also the sweetness and majesty of blossoming roses ! I inhale their fragrance and feast on their beauty till inebriated !

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 3/24/2019 3:56:00 PM

Congratulations, Vijay A wonderful poem, written so beautifully.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/24/2019 4:18:00 PM

Thank you Sandra..much appreciate your visit and comments.

Robertina B.

Date: 3/23/2019 2:29:00 PM

Congratulations Vijay!! Your creativity shines.. You penned a glorious write! Absolutely stellar!! Have a blessed day ...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/23/2019 3:38:00 PM

Much appreciate your kind feedback Robertina..many thanks.

Gregory Ramos

Date: 3/20/2019 7:38:00 AM

"When I'm lost in confines of my thoughts Solace I seek from brilliant cosmic stars Prodding for answers to question marks Uncovering truth in words of a paradox," my favorite stanza, congratulations , such a beautiful write

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/20/2019 2:38:00 PM

Many thanks Gregory..appreciate your visit and kind feedback.

Frances Schiavina

Date: 3/18/2019 10:53:00 AM

Congratulations Vijay. Your poetry is awesome!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/19/2019 3:05:00 PM

Thank you Frances..appreciate your visit.

Susan Mills

Date: 3/17/2019 3:10:00 PM

After reading your poem I feel like I just got a dozen roses. So many flowers to speak of. How fabulous. Thanks so much! I can almost smell them.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/17/2019 3:28:00 PM

So kind of you to say that..much appreciate the feedback..many thanks, Susannah.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/15/2019 1:53:00 PM

- Congratulations on your NUMBER ONE !!! ... at the Best New Poems list, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/15/2019 5:23:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 3/14/2019 9:47:00 AM

How fortunate you are to have such a companion as poetry! Congratulations on this #1.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/15/2019 5:23:00 PM

Thank you SW--much appreciate your visit and kind remarks.

Robertina B.

Date: 3/14/2019 8:58:00 AM

Congratulations on making the top poems list, Vijay.. An absolutely Amazing verse.. Wonderfully penned! Have a blessed day..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/14/2019 9:18:00 AM

Thank you Robertina..much appreciate your kind remarks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/13/2019 11:20:00 PM

Congratulations Vijay, as this poem has reached the top of the best poems list. :) I am smiling, in my evening. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/14/2019 7:12:00 AM

A smile in your comments--many thanks Brandy.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/13/2019 6:08:00 PM

Congratulations on having this gem at the top of the best new poems list and Potd Vijay. A deserving honor! xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/14/2019 7:10:00 AM

Much appreciate the kind remarks..many thanks, Connie.

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/13/2019 2:55:00 PM

Great to see your poem near the top of the best poem list! :) Congrats!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/14/2019 7:10:00 AM

Thank you Heidi.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 3/13/2019 11:10:00 AM

How have I missed this? Absolutely wonderful Pom Vijay. xomo!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/14/2019 7:10:00 AM

Thank you Maureen.

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/13/2019 10:47:00 AM

Wonderful write Vijay, no wonder we're all here to congratulate you, well done my friend...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/14/2019 7:09:00 AM

Thank you Charlie.

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/12/2019 7:08:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Vijay.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/14/2019 7:09:00 AM

Thank you Line.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 3/12/2019 10:07:00 AM

Beautiful lines, Vijay: Congratulations on you placement in SI’s contest. Hugs, SuZ

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/14/2019 7:09:00 AM

Thank you SuZ.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/6/2019 1:29:00 PM

Congratulations Vijay, on this win!! There is always a reason to smile. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/6/2019 5:29:00 PM

Thank you Brandy.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/6/2019 11:15:00 AM

Congrats ...SK

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/6/2019 5:29:00 PM

Thank you Sara.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/3/2019 12:32:00 PM

Hello Vijay, you create a beautifully written poem It made me feel like i was there. Have a nice day my friend.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/6/2019 5:29:00 PM

Thank you Darlene..appreciate your visit and comments.

Carole Duet

Date: 3/2/2019 3:09:00 PM

So lovely, Vijay. Your description of what inspires you is so "spot on". And, congrats on your win. :D

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/6/2019 5:28:00 PM

Thank you Carole..much appreciate.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/2/2019 9:18:00 AM

Back with congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/6/2019 5:28:00 PM

Thank you Eve for the return visit..much appreciate.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/28/2019 10:28:00 PM

Your words bring a smile. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/6/2019 5:27:00 PM

Thank you Brandy.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/28/2019 7:05:00 PM

Still waiting for a new poem from you!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/6/2019 5:27:00 PM

Coming soon.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/28/2019 12:43:00 PM

Hi Vijay, Poetry soup could not have picked a greater poem or a nicer person to award POTD to, a great honor - congratulations, your poetry rocks! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/6/2019 5:27:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/28/2019 10:15:00 AM

This is so moving--conveying a range of emotions. CONGRATS on your win and POTD, Vijay! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/6/2019 5:26:00 PM

Thank you Janice.