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A Smile Cast

Gentle acts of kindness change the path of man spirals sing of virtue unwritten laws and games rage rage against the bitter twisted lives A smile cast on winters day reveals warmer songs a mothers touch a sons remorse the winter lingers on gentle acts of kindness change the path of man The bitter past with bridges built can teach a broken man with strength he learns to listen and build a better plan rage rage against the bitter twisted lives With help and education the angers gone my friend a winters day is broken with a Milo and a friend gentle acts of kindness can change the path of man We walk along a summers beach enjoy the plays we planned we drink and watch the sports relax the futures in our hands rage rage against the bitter twisted lives With friendship we build lives to live and summer dreams to share with friendship we build roads to walk and knowledge gets us there Gentle acts of kindness change the path of man rage rage against the bitter twisted lives.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/6/2014 10:13:00 PM
BERNARD, :) The best policy is kindness and respect. Congratulations, on your "Random Acts of Kindness" win... Have a sweet day or night... Love LINDA
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Date: 8/1/2014 11:30:00 PM
A great write, covering a big range of chances for kindness. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/1/2014 8:27:00 AM
Great write! Big congrats on your win!!
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Date: 8/1/2014 5:32:00 AM
Wonderful write Bernard,, congrats on huge win!
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Date: 8/1/2014 4:58:00 AM
Awesome write and win, Congrats on the win, Bernard
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Date: 7/31/2014 4:54:00 PM
Congratulations, Bernard, on your high placement in Debbie's contest.
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Date: 7/31/2014 3:05:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 7/31/2014 2:32:00 PM
Typo last line too Bernard & you do need periods at the end of the sentences IF you are going to capitalize the 1st word - just keep polishing the gem, I'm judging now. ;)
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Date: 7/17/2014 7:55:00 PM
Thank you for the submission, please capitalize all words over 3 letters in a Title :) Light & Love
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