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A Smile

A warm tender smile
Radiates love from within
Makes me feel adored

Eyes that pierce my heart
And fill it with true passion
Forever time pauses

It seems eternity
But it is only moments
Now just memory

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/19/2009 5:31:00 AM
I wish I could across invisible barriers show the forever smile your poem evoked: a sweet desire for more. Welcome
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Date: 3/17/2009 11:41:00 AM
Interesting use of this short form. Yes, a smile does light up a day. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 3/16/2009 11:44:00 PM
excellent write... each haiku flowing so well!! ~ Arany
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Date: 3/16/2009 8:26:00 PM
Beautiful and touching. Very well written. Smiles from Lolita
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