A Smart Being

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" OUR FUTURE IF WE DON'T SMART UP "

There was a smart being on planet earth That made earth its home since its very birth It was playful and joly Convinced nothing was holy Eventually led itself to death! © Demetrios Trifiatis 07 January 2018 10,10,7,7,10.

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Silent One

Date: 1/7/2018 12:37:00 PM

Nice to see you doing limericks Demetrios

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/7/2018 9:50:00 AM

Hi Demetrios, What a sad and horrible ending to well written piece:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/7/2018 8:13:00 AM

- A realistic end ... the human being is not as smart as we think - Well written, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/7/2018 8:04:00 AM

A sad ending.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 1/7/2018 8:03:00 AM

Oh sharp pen my friend!! Fantastic and sadly true. Much love dear poet! xomo :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/7/2018 6:36:00 AM

Is that all of us? A lovely introspective for everyone, Demetrios.

Maria Williams

Date: 1/7/2018 4:53:00 AM

Alas - man thinks he very smart - or perhaps some men. When will they ever learn my dear Demetrios - Greed plays a major part it the planet's and our destruction...A FAVE from me - Maria xxx