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A Slow Death

In the hollows of your mind live my eyes Staring and stalking as you think by I move in the grey creating white lies Together it is, as we count your days As you steadily weaken before my gaze And the more you age the more I will pry I will end your days before you go You’ll barely see, worry, or think about I I will take you over and slowly grow I’ll bring dark clouds with pouring rain And so it shall be I'll take your brain I will be you and you still won't die 1 Apr 2018

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Date: 4/28/2018 8:13:00 AM
Beautiful, unique, lovely, rare, effable and creative. Lovely work.
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 4/28/2018 5:17:00 PM
Thanks a lot, not many people like this one.
Date: 4/1/2018 6:29:00 AM
A very pleasant read, Jerry. Love the haunting rhythm.
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