A Slave To Your Gaze

Such a passionate Senryu here Carolyn!Enjoyed again.

I lost too. haha

CAme back to this oldie of yours to say, I don't remember what I commented to jack about his poem. Usually he does short ones so I probably told him I liked it short? Anyway, I stand by that. The judge you mentioned is very different from me. She did not like one of my poems in one of her last contests because she told me it was not enough detail. I disagreed and would not change it. I think shorter poems are usually better (not in all cases but generally speaking!!)

by the way, I think that wedding song came out in 69, but I could be wrong. I was thinking I met Glenn(son of the preacher man in 69). since I am sure I was 14 then. Didn't you love that song? Glad you liked my ending. I was so repulsed hahahaha. Something you have to aquire a "taste" for!!

...man...I'm really bad on the keys Carolyn, when I try to type fast, lol

I'm not 'fin nin' ta read all these comment my friend ;) yet I do sea's that a Congratulations is in order here(((((claps))))) And it is a fine one write dear poet ! Have a great week Carolyn....much love, james....by-the-by; I'll be answering your e-m shortly;)

Congratulations on your win Carolyn in the contest "Eyes First Meet" sponsored by Michael Falotico. Love, Carol

just lovely Carolyn, congrats on your win in the contest

Big congratulations on your win in Michael's contest," When Eyes First Met." I am so happy for you, Carolyn! Your amazing talent has brought, once again, to the top of the winners' list. Be very proud of your achievement and smile! God bless you and watch over you. May your Sunday be filled with inspiration and happiness. Peace and Love, Andrew.

I really liked this. Glad to see it so high,Carolyn. WEll deserved win!

So great to see this one at the top Carolyn, congratulations to you.. Love Wilma

An awesome write from you Carolyn!Congrats on your 2nd place win--kash

Sensatioanl string Senryu, Carolyn. Many congrations on your BIG WIN. Lainie

Loved it first time round, gets even better second time round,congrats Carolyn, your words are so wonderful so full of meaning. Harry

This sure is a very romantic write Carolyn- could almost picture those turquoise eyes too! Super congrats on your win :) hugs

Many many heartiest congrats for this super win dear Carolyn.

I knew this wold be high and glad I was right. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of Michael, Carolyn

Congratulations on your amazing 2nd Place Win with this gem in Michael's "Eyes First meet" Contest, Carolyn! Love, Annalise

like i said, this is a gem of a piece , carols... you've got that " staying " power!! super CONGRATS for the big win..:) huggs, nette

Congrats my dear Carolyn on your 2nd place win in my contest... And I will be catching up on your work this weekend..love Michael

Yes Carolyn, much much better! Cough medicine helped considerably -- coughed so hard my head ached:( Pharmacist did advise the cough medicine wouldn't entirely get rid of the cough though and she was right on that. It's tolerable;) This has been one of the nastiest colds I've had in a long time! Thought I'd let you know I'm on the mend:)

a beautiful piece of poetry. thank you for reading my the cellar door and for your comment.

three lovely poems each one individually worthy of a prize i like eyes so much and you have summed up their qualites so beautifully....well done Carolyn......you should win with this one Ok