A Skipping Rock

Flat, gray skipping rock Worn smooth by years of living Perfectly rounded Bouncing along life's river Propelled by the strength of love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Degenhardt Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 9:10 AM
The form seems perfect while your words create a very clear picture of the rock and its qualities and how they pertain to life. Beautiful!
Warden Avatar
July 30, 2011 at 2:28 AM
Sweet and simple..good luck in the contest..thanks for comments on my writings..hugs..jo
Brown Avatar
July 29, 2011 at 9:08 AM
Wishing you the best in the contest Barbara. Love, Carol
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