A Six-Year-Old Boy's Letter To Santa--Nursery Rhyme

I’ve been such a good boy this year. I know you are able to hear and see what I do and what I say too. I’m happy ‘cause Christmas is near. I’m not asking you for a lot. I most want a talking robot, the game Peggle Blast,* some Legos, and last, a puppy, and I’ll name him Spot. My big sis has been good as me. She helped Mama put up the tree. She does all her chores and takes me outdoors to play. She’s as sweet as can be. She hasn’t wrote you for a while. Here’s how you can make my sis smile. Please bring her a ring; she’ll call it her “bling.” And Skechers, please. You know her style.
Love Your Friend Bobby Please forgive the errors. Remember~~I’m six! *Peggle Blast is a Puzzle Game developed by Electric Arts. Using an app, you play this Android Game on your PC or Mac. November 23, 2022~~~placed 1st in Eve Roper's contest
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Dietrich Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 2:57 PM
Glad to see this on the winners' list. Big congrats to you.
Canerdy Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 6:28 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea. Janice
Roper Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 9:48 AM
Janice, cute letter to Santa. Congratulations on your win, . Many Blessings my friend
Canerdy Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 6:30 PM
Thanks so much, Eve, for sponsoring and for my win!! Janice
Messina Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 4:56 AM
Adorable, Janice. Congratulations on your win! Charlie
Canerdy Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 6:31 PM
Thanks so much, Charles. Janice
Kendrick Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 3:08 AM
Congratulations on your winner in Eve's contest. Way to go. Sara
Canerdy Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 6:32 PM
Thanks so much, Sara. Janice
Faulkner Avatar
November 26, 2022 at 11:30 AM
How adorable, it feels just like what a six year old would ask Santa (I would want a talking robot too) Good luck with the contest~
Canerdy Avatar
December 1, 2022 at 5:58 AM
Michelle, thank you so much! Janice
Dietrich Avatar
November 24, 2022 at 10:54 AM
Awww, you did such a sweet cheery one . Was it supposed to be Christmas theme. I had planned a different topic. Great job, Janice
Canerdy Avatar
November 25, 2022 at 10:15 AM
THANKS so much! Your comment means a great deal because I seldom write children's poems. No, a Christmas theme is not required. I look forward to reading yours. Janice
Hankins Avatar
November 23, 2022 at 1:12 PM
This is a marvelous poem, Janice. The innocence of childhood shines through. I hope you will submit it to Eve's children's limericks contest.
Canerdy Avatar
November 23, 2022 at 1:20 PM
Milton, thanks SO much. I wrote this for Eve's contest. Janice
Cunningham Avatar
November 23, 2022 at 11:56 AM
Great limericks for children Janice, Good luck in the contest and happy thanksgiving for tomorrow. Tom
Canerdy Avatar
November 23, 2022 at 12:04 PM
Thanks, Tom. I wish the same for you! Janice
Andresen Avatar
November 23, 2022 at 9:48 AM
- A lovely and sweet letter, Janice :) - GL in the contest :) -
Canerdy Avatar
November 23, 2022 at 12:03 PM
Thanks so much, Anne-Lise. Janice
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