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A sinner speaks

I am no saint so please forgive my soul’s taint for I wish to live with all my flaws which I accept but now heart thaws wherein I wept seeking to be saved merged in God’s light for he who misbehaved had not clear sight clouded by the ego and bemused by thought which I now let go to become self-taught

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Jay Narain

Date: 3/1/2024 11:30:00 AM

You have attained benightment long time ago. I like your spiritual poems.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/1/2024 6:57:00 PM

So happy you enjoyed, Jay. I’m far from enlightened. In fact, enlightenment is not the attaining but the falling away of identity.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/1/2024 5:27:00 AM

Dear US, Your poem bravely explores the journey of self-acceptance and seeking redemption. Your words convey profound honesty and humility, acknowledging flaws while expressing a desire for spiritual growth and clarity. The realization of letting go of ego and embracing God's light is beautifully articulated. What an introspective and soul-stirring piece. - Blessings, Daniel

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/1/2024 7:03:00 AM

Thank you, Daniel. If a past life regression is done, we would undoubtedly be horrified to see our actions in the past. Yet we can always transcend if we reform