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Kerry's Rhythm and Rubble Contest ~ July 16, 2026

A Single White Rose

In luminous light tonight, beneath June's jaded moon, 
a beautiful bloom stands tall against my garden wall.
So profoundly pure as to lure the pollen seekers
on those golden days when warm rays of the sun
frame its frilled beauty as dawn spills across my lawn.

Bees seize the chance to collect its sweet nectar,
as if it was Heaven sent for the fragrant floral scent
of that single long-stemmed white petaled rose.

But cut that perfect flower, I would never, ever do.
To end the length of its natural life would be a sin,
most deserving of having my hand torn by a thorn
if I dared get too close to harming this ravishing rose.

That innocent flora, that beauteous white rose chose 
to grow and glow as an alabaster statue in my flower bed.
No other could possibly prevail over its pallid loveliness
when dew drops cling to her as she's gently caressed
each summer morning by fingers of the wafting wind.
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Beaufort Avatar
July 30, 2026 at 11:50 AM
Lin, I do like this poem. The third stanza where you discuss the sin of cutting the flower is more than just praise....it reflects a set of ethics and sets the poem apart from standard though well constructed verse. Your appreciation for nature is apparent and a lesson for everyone who visits. Hope you are well and sending smiles!!!
Gibbons Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 5:17 PM
Wow absolutely wow Lin so powerfully crafted of such a beautiful rose. The moon shines on it radiating depth of the beauty of the rose. " In luminous light tonight, beneath June's jaded moon " deep emotion it took my breath away looking at rose. Spectacular." but cut that perfect flower, I would never, ever do " in that I see depth of your soul talking. Adoration, protection , unconditional love. I'm so inspired, So many words floating I need write, hugs friend <3 wanna fav it no button :(
Kitchin Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 3:41 AM
Lin, this is such a beautiful poem and imagery. I can see the beautiful white rose under the moonlight. Best for the contest.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 16, 2026 at 12:42 PM
"A Single White Rose" is a wonderful/lovely write. What a pretty white rose picture you have here with her dew drops. I enjoyed reading. "Good Luck" Have a blessed/fun day writing away, Paula................
Empress Avatar
July 16, 2026 at 11:35 AM
Ah, there’s so much depth in this beautifully crafted poem, dear Linnersz. I felt its emotional layers too! The white, innocent rose ~unblemished and virginal ~I would not dare touch, for she deserves to be free, to thrive in her garden of love and freedom, admired from afar. Not many gardeners know how to tend to her; she needs the empathy of a poetic quill like yours, Linnersz ~artistic and soulful. How profound this is! I love the flow and cadence. An exquisite weave! Pleasure reading. BOL
Sharma  Avatar
July 16, 2026 at 10:02 AM
Gosh, this is such a breathtaking poem dear Lin.. I love the hues that you've smeared here with your poetic brushstrokes that just leave the heart mesmerized and enchanted... The spilling dawn.. heaven sent scents ahhh everything is just so lusciously eloquent throughout! And the way you've described you must never seize the natural life of that beauty blossom.. "most deserving of having my hand torn by a thorn if I dared get too close to harming this ravishing rose" that is just so palpable.. and those "fingers of waiting wind" really left marks upon my heart! "to grow and glow as an alabaster statue in my flower bed" excellent imagery. Love this a lot! Best wishes to you in the contest, sending light and love, huggssszzzz
Lane Avatar
July 16, 2026 at 10:12 AM
Your remarks are very gracious, Hiya and I thank you for each one of them. You grasp my emotions and feel what I've left unsaid. That's a gift that you have... Ink has it, too. Comments from both of you are poetic whispers that are gently left for me... they make me smile.
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