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A Single Flame

innocence memorialized in candlelight as we sit and dream in its gleam of flickering and playful flames timeless and free flowing finding each other in the midst of longing vigilant in the rapture of a touch reimagined ritualizing the oneness of our being connected in the purest form within the glow of warm light and soft wishes without the barriers of the tick-tock clock endlessly - breathlessly lost in love

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Date: 3/11/2024 11:28:00 AM
Dear Lonna, as always, I found myself captivated by your love poem like a moth captivated by a flame. Silky, lustrous, intimate imagery glides upon the poetic page and delicately drapes around the soul. An exquisite creation, my dear poetry friend. Congratulations for your win in Charlotte's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 3/21/2024 12:48:00 PM
Your comments are always so appreciated!
Date: 3/11/2024 9:56:00 AM
i really like this little piece - it's evocative and romantic, the lines falling so softly and naturally - congrats on your win in my contest :)
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 3/21/2024 12:49:00 PM
Charlotte thank you for the lovely comment! Health and happiness

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