A Simple Winter Wish

A winter wish is like a kiss upon a virgin cheek
it softly woos with words like jewels that brightly shine and speak
and all around its song resounds in notes of pure delight 
its message rings and slowly brings a weary heart to flight. 

What are these words, such blessed words, that underscore the season? 
From long lost times, an ancient sign, that went beyond all reason? 
A Light came down, bowed to the ground, a quiet hush, a swoon
as lowly shepherds heard the news, angels sang their sacred tunes. 

A Child was born, of humble means, into a lowly manger
was sent forth from the heart of God, to save mankind from danger. 

Oh, Savior mine, for all humankind, Christ freed us from our sins
the truest Love, given from above, new life is found in Him.
And so, my friend, my winter wish is truly, simply this
that you would know the love of God and live in everlasting bliss. 





Written on 12/11/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Agustin Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 1:12 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this hope-filled and faith-propped muse of yours, very well expressed in your poetic style. God bless you.
Leiser Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 10:50 AM
Thanks, Beata! Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you and your family! God bless! :)
Carber Avatar
December 26, 2021 at 9:32 AM
VERY lovely, quite lyrical and with a great opening stanza-- congrats Laura, and have a most glorious 2022!
Leiser Avatar
December 26, 2021 at 3:47 PM
Thank you, L.J. I’m glad you enjoyed this one! :)
Alex Avatar
December 26, 2021 at 2:56 AM
"kiss upon a virgin cheek" - Beautiful! The whole poem especially the wish "you would know the love of God and live in everlasting bliss" -s great. Congratulations!
Leiser Avatar
December 26, 2021 at 3:46 PM
Thank you, Christuraj. So glad you liked this one! :)
Goff Avatar
December 25, 2021 at 10:51 AM
Be it so, Laura! Great write! Congrats!
Leiser Avatar
December 25, 2021 at 4:10 PM
Thank you, James! :)
Watt Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 5:47 PM
Laura, anyone who knows the love of God and the peace of Christ can't help but wish for others to have that same joy. Beautifully expressed, thank you for putting your faith into words and sharing it with us here at Soup. Hugs ~ John
Leiser Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 7:29 PM
Thank you, John, for your sweet support and kindness! I’m glad you liked this and I’m glad that we have this venue to share our love of Christ through poetry! :)
Baker Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 6:11 AM
A soulful retelling of the greatest story ever told, Laura Your love for Jesus comes shinning through this poem about Him. Thanks for sharing with us. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill A fav for me!
Leiser Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 10:05 AM
Thank you, Bill, snd yes, I do love Jesus! He saved a sinner such as me! God bless you, poetry friend! :)
Daub Avatar
December 13, 2021 at 1:46 PM
I love your Godly content, beautifully written...
Leiser Avatar
December 13, 2021 at 4:21 PM
Thanks so much, Grace! I wanted to focus on the true heart and meaning of Christmas here :)
Awtry Avatar
December 12, 2021 at 1:23 PM
Laura, I love everything about this! It is a fave for me
Leiser Avatar
December 12, 2021 at 2:14 PM
Thank you so very much for your kind and supportive words, P.S.! God bless you! :)
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