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blue forget me nots adorn wild flower bouquet fledgling leaves the nest 06/20/20

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Funom Makama

Date: 6/25/2020 1:01:00 PM

Really a simple wedding.. I have experienced a lot of these during the lockdown, the colours, flamboyance, show-offs, gifts, displays were gone.. Only the couple and simple flower bouquet. What a lovely poem.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/25/2020 5:36:00 PM

i think many were just happy to marry and have a celebration with family and friends at a later date when the world is a safer place:-) hugs Jan xx

Judy Ball

Date: 6/22/2020 1:57:00 PM

Excellent Jan. Wonderful sentiment and love the pic. Blue flowers are my favorites. God Bless. JB PS Please visit my last poem again. I added some lines to it. Thanks bunches. JB

Jan Allison
Date: 6/25/2020 5:34:00 PM

will drop right on by:-) hugs Jan xx

Terri Stiles

Date: 6/21/2020 7:44:00 PM

My favorite poem ever.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/25/2020 5:34:00 PM

aww thanks Terri:-) hugs jan xx

Terri Stiles

Date: 6/21/2020 7:43:00 PM

Jan-Thank you for reminding us what is really important beyond the fact that we have been complaining about going back to work with ugly masks on!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/25/2020 5:29:00 PM

thanks Terri, the simple things are so important we were on a walk and i saw a forget me not growing in a crack in the pavement:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 6/21/2020 4:13:00 PM

Although forget-me-knots are more common, your version is perfect for the American Father's Day! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison
Date: 6/25/2020 5:28:00 PM

lol:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/21/2020 2:23:00 PM

very well done, Jan. Was this for a contest? It reads like a real haiku.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/25/2020 5:25:00 PM

no just a poem based on seeing a forget me not growing in a crack in the pavement by an old whitewashed chapel which is now a house:-) hugs Jan xxx

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/21/2020 9:49:00 AM

Very nice to read today Jan :)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/25/2020 5:24:00 PM

thanks Heidi:-) hugs jan xx

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/21/2020 7:41:00 AM

So lovely - God bless you with many more wonderful poems, dear Jan. Love to you, Gina

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 6/21/2020 5:37:00 AM

pretty pleasure to read

Jan Allison
Date: 6/25/2020 5:20:00 PM

thanks Mahtab:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/21/2020 5:31:00 AM

Although mine have flown the nest they often return, Hopefully lockdown restrictions will soon be lifted. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 6/21/2020 5:38:00 AM

we cannot leave the island without getting permission but in general lockdown is lifted and we have no social distancing any more! hope its not too long before you can see the family:-) hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/20/2020 11:54:00 PM

My little fledglings have all left our nest Jan. I just hope they forget me not! Lovely haiku! Blessings xxoo

Jan Allison
Date: 6/21/2020 3:23:00 AM

Thanks Connie you interpreted the poem perfectly!!!:-)hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/20/2020 9:29:00 PM

Really pretty, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/21/2020 3:22:00 AM

thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx