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blue forget me nots adorn wild flower bouquet fledgling leaves the nest 06/20/20

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Date: 6/25/2020 1:01:00 PM
Really a simple wedding.. I have experienced a lot of these during the lockdown, the colours, flamboyance, show-offs, gifts, displays were gone.. Only the couple and simple flower bouquet. What a lovely poem.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 6/25/2020 5:36:00 PM
i think many were just happy to marry and have a celebration with family and friends at a later date when the world is a safer place:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/22/2020 1:57:00 PM
Excellent Jan. Wonderful sentiment and love the pic. Blue flowers are my favorites. God Bless. JB PS Please visit my last poem again. I added some lines to it. Thanks bunches. JB
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Date: 6/25/2020 5:34:00 PM
will drop right on by:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/21/2020 7:44:00 PM
My favorite poem ever.
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Date: 6/25/2020 5:34:00 PM
aww thanks Terri:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/21/2020 7:43:00 PM
Jan-Thank you for reminding us what is really important beyond the fact that we have been complaining about going back to work with ugly masks on!
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Date: 6/25/2020 5:29:00 PM
thanks Terri, the simple things are so important we were on a walk and i saw a forget me not growing in a crack in the pavement:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/21/2020 4:13:00 PM
Although forget-me-knots are more common, your version is perfect for the American Father's Day! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 6/25/2020 5:28:00 PM
lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/21/2020 2:23:00 PM
very well done, Jan. Was this for a contest? It reads like a real haiku.
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Date: 6/25/2020 5:25:00 PM
no just a poem based on seeing a forget me not growing in a crack in the pavement by an old whitewashed chapel which is now a house:-) hugs Jan xxx
Date: 6/21/2020 9:49:00 AM
Very nice to read today Jan :)
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Date: 6/25/2020 5:24:00 PM
thanks Heidi:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/21/2020 7:41:00 AM
So lovely - God bless you with many more wonderful poems, dear Jan. Love to you, Gina
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Date: 6/21/2020 5:37:00 AM
pretty pleasure to read
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Date: 6/25/2020 5:20:00 PM
thanks Mahtab:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/21/2020 5:31:00 AM
Although mine have flown the nest they often return, Hopefully lockdown restrictions will soon be lifted. Tom
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Date: 6/21/2020 5:38:00 AM
we cannot leave the island without getting permission but in general lockdown is lifted and we have no social distancing any more! hope its not too long before you can see the family:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/20/2020 11:54:00 PM
My little fledglings have all left our nest Jan. I just hope they forget me not! Lovely haiku! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/21/2020 3:23:00 AM
Thanks Connie you interpreted the poem perfectly!!!:-)hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/20/2020 9:29:00 PM
Really pretty, Jan!
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Date: 6/21/2020 3:22:00 AM
thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx