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A Simple Love Song

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Life is complicated darling, But I prefer the simple life. So this is my song to you For I yearn you’ll be my wife. Where will I find love tonight? Tell me darling that it’s you, When will happy days be mine? I can’t bear to feel so blue. I’ve been running round and round, But my poor heart cannot fit. Can I beg you on this night? Let our hearts be tightly knit. So my darling tell me when I can’t bear a moment more Take this ring and just say yes, Let us make our hearts feel glad. So my darling tell me when Yes my love just tell me when! Every minute seems so far Every second proves a day Let pure joy enter our hearts Please I’ll just show you the way. Yes our love will conquer all Let me whisper in your ear And declare my heart’s desires I’ve loved you for so long dear. So my darling tell me when I can’t bear a moment more Take this ring and just say yes, Let us make this heart feel stronger. So my darling tell me when Yes my love just tell me when!

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Eve Roper

Date: 5/5/2021 6:05:00 PM

I have really fallen behind reading. Another beautiful and romantic verse. Oh, to be young again, I miss those days. Enjoyed reading my friend.

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/4/2021 7:28:00 AM

Hi Victor, I enjoyed your beautiful love song. Who could refuse such a lovely tune? Good rhymes and content. Well done:-) Alexis

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/4/2021 4:52:00 AM

Hello Victor - Your entry and words are why poems of romance will always rule and shine light. May all know of love. Thank you for sharing.

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/3/2021 11:35:00 PM

LOve the poetry Victor, and the rhyming and rhythm. to make a wonderful song.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 5/3/2021 5:56:00 PM

Simply a lovely love song Victor, beautiful lyrics… Belle

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/3/2021 4:46:00 PM

Hello Victor, I Just finished reading this poem. I found it to be romantic. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/3/2021 2:55:00 PM

Simple but cute, Victor. Nicely done.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/3/2021 11:25:00 AM

A charmingly romantic proposal, so earnest and heartfelt. Nicely done, Victor. :D

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/3/2021 8:41:00 AM

The love in your heart is overflowing, Victor. Hoping you are well my friend.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/3/2021 7:55:00 AM

Ahh!! Very romantic and passionate work. If just a work you portrayed the part well. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara

Quoth Theraven

Date: 5/3/2021 7:36:00 AM

Victor, Ah, the simple life.. ~~ 'So my darling tell me when // I can’t bear a moment more // Take this ring and just say yes,' I think that's a wonderful refrain, with a heart promised in a ring. -Richard