Victor Buhagiar Poet Verse

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A Simple Love Song

Life is complicated darling,
But I prefer the simple life.
So this is my song to you
For I yearn you’ll be my wife.

Where will I find love tonight?
Tell me darling that it’s you,
When will happy days be mine?
I can’t bear to feel so blue.

I’ve been running round and round,
But my poor heart cannot fit.
Can I beg you on this night?
Let our hearts be tightly knit.

     So my darling tell me when
     I can’t bear a moment more
     Take this ring and just say yes,
     Let us make our hearts feel glad.
     So my darling tell me when
     Yes my love just tell me when!

Every minute seems so far
Every second proves a day
Let pure joy enter our hearts
Please I’ll just show you the way.

Yes our love will conquer all
Let me whisper in your ear
And declare my heart’s desires
I’ve loved you for so long dear.

     So my darling tell me when
     I can’t bear a moment more
     Take this ring and just say yes,
     Let us make this heart feel stronger.
     So my darling tell me when
     Yes my love just tell me when!

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Eve Roper May 5, 2021 at 6:05 PM I have really fallen behind reading. Another beautiful and romantic verse. Oh, to be young again, I miss those days. Enjoyed reading my friend.

Alexis Y. May 4, 2021 at 7:28 AM Hi Victor, I enjoyed your beautiful love song. Who could refuse such a lovely tune? Good rhymes and content. Well done:-) Alexis

Lisa Ricci May 4, 2021 at 4:52 AM Hello Victor - Your entry and words are why poems of romance will always rule and shine light. May all know of love. Thank you for sharing.

Harry Horsman May 3, 2021 at 11:35 PM LOve the poetry Victor, and the rhyming and rhythm. to make a wonderful song.

Beryl Edmonds May 3, 2021 at 5:56 PM Simply a lovely love song Victor, beautiful lyrics… Belle

Darlene De Beaulieu May 3, 2021 at 4:46 PM Hello Victor, I Just finished reading this poem. I found it to be romantic. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Andrea Dietrich May 3, 2021 at 2:55 PM Simple but cute, Victor. Nicely done.

Evelyn Judy Buehler May 3, 2021 at 11:25 AM A charmingly romantic proposal, so earnest and heartfelt. Nicely done, Victor. :D

Daniel Turner May 3, 2021 at 8:41 AM The love in your heart is overflowing, Victor. Hoping you are well my friend.

Sara Kendrick May 3, 2021 at 7:55 AM Ahh!! Very romantic and passionate work. If just a work you portrayed the part well. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara

Quoth Theraven May 3, 2021 at 7:36 AM Victor, Ah, the simple life.. ~~ 'So my darling tell me when // I can’t bear a moment more // Take this ring and just say yes,' I think that's a wonderful refrain, with a heart promised in a ring. -Richard

Vijay Pandit May 3, 2021 at 5:31 AM Delightful verse of love and longing. Enjoyed the romantic journey through your charming words, Victor. A joy to read!

Joanna Daniel May 3, 2021 at 4:49 AM A lovely song, simple yet profound, Victor, well written:)

Kim Rodrigues May 3, 2021 at 4:20 AM The rumination of a romantic. Love it. Hugs ~ Kim

Sotto Poet May 3, 2021 at 2:48 AM Maybe love is still is there; it would be superb if she got together with the stars of your great personality.

Unseeking Seeker May 3, 2021 at 1:40 AM Quite an endearing serenade!

Tom Cunningham May 3, 2021 at 1:25 AM Love is certainly in the air Victor, I hope that she says yes. Tom