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A Simple Dream

A dream is simply a story It has neither a beginning, nor an end It starts in the middle and ends where it began Like all stories, it paints a picture Some pictures are in charcoal, others are embossed But they all proffer an image, in the minds’ eye An eye which may not see clearly But it is a vision nonetheless A vision of grandeur, a vision of love or Simply a vision of nonsense

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/10/2014 5:43:00 PM
I have a pretty active dream life..I am impressed with your description of their "vision"..I am sorry to say most of mine fall into your last line category...lol. b Barbara
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Mark Trichet
Date: 10/10/2014 8:18:00 PM
Haha - me too Barbara. Thnx for popping round to browse my scribbles. I honestly had a lot of fun writing that one. I'm sorry if some of my stuff seems a little skewed towards the environment, but hey, I guess its my way of venting...
Date: 8/25/2014 5:46:00 PM
Dreams are mysterious things. They can be good or bad, and they may even inspire us to keep dreaming! I really enjoyed your beautiful poem, Mark! Very nicely done!
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Mark Trichet
Date: 8/28/2014 6:31:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed it Kelly, I had fun expressing it...
Date: 8/22/2014 1:23:00 AM
I like how you state things. This was most interesting to read!
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Mark Trichet
Date: 8/28/2014 6:29:00 PM
Thanks Andrea
Date: 8/21/2014 5:45:00 AM
Creative work..It is good to dream even if they are nonsense..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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