A Simple Change of Colored Life

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Orangey and blend reddish hued carpet waits for deaths carpet in white. 2019 September 09

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Fj Thomas

Date: 9/17/2019 6:22:00 PM

Very beautifully descriptive Will. The unique wording lingers in the imagination :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/17/2019 6:30:00 PM

Thanks again, this caused me to write 'The Testaments' --you'll see my meaning after you read it, also 'Cascade' ~ Aloha always William

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/10/2019 2:45:00 AM

"deaths carpet in white" - a beautiful word choice, William.

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/10/2019 3:36:00 AM

Away from our mountaintop, nuthin', our coconut palm leaves go from a verdant green to a droopy yellow to shrivels of browns on the ground covered by wind-swept sands ~ Aloha always William