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A Simmering Smoke Surrounds Me

A simmering smoke surrounds me
And it’s you
Coming to abduct me 
From this life
I’m in your world now
Fenced in by loyal love
Confined by durable devotion
Would you mind
If I stayed forever?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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