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A Silver Fox

a silver fox slinks its eyes glint sharper than steel--- swift as lightning bolt ~*~ This was inspired by p.d.'s sponsored contest.

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Matthew Anish

Date: 1/22/2011 6:19:00 AM

Nice poem! You stuck to the 5 7 5 which is all to the good! Just received my new issue of National Wildlife - you offer a picture of wildlife which is marvelous! Yours Matthew Anish

Daver Austin

Date: 1/20/2011 1:19:00 PM

Yes! Look out chickens. Like that silver fox mucho. Love, dave

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/20/2011 10:37:00 AM

The fox is cunning and quick, just as you described so eloquently in your haiku, Annalise. And it just makes me boil that my sister has a floor-length silver fox coat that was made in Paris. These creatures are too beautiful to kill for their fur! If you didn't enter one in Charles Henderson's contest yet, this one could easily be modified to fit his 15-syllables or fewer requirement and would make a great entry. Love you, dear, but I'm struggling now as you know. Praying for strength -- cd

Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/20/2011 7:05:00 AM

Enjoyed the read of this Haiku you've penned here, Annalise! Great imagery!...Always, Gert

Deb Radke

Date: 1/20/2011 6:04:00 AM

Hi Annalise -- lovely haiku. I love the idea of the silver fox slinking. You have phrased this line so well. Thank you for all the kind comments you leave regarding my work. I so appreciate you reading and taking time to write. Best wishes. Deb

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/19/2011 2:51:00 PM

Your image of your words scream out in your poetry... well done my dear...always Michael

Christopher Marcum

Date: 1/19/2011 12:37:00 PM

nice vivid painting and image of this, silver fox; searching for prey that won't be able to over-power them; such as a mightier roaring lion -- thank you for the kind com and, this also can be clearly seen by all my dear, Annalise. love, christopher