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A Silky Moonwalk

Her bare shoulder red silky strap's open secret her bare shoulder sensuous silk's silent wonder opens up fantasies' floodgate moonwalk from anklet to bracelet her bare shoulder © 2011 kashinath karmakar ======================== Placement:4th;(Sept.2011) By:kashinath karmakar (13th Sept.2011) Contest:Weave a Rondelet Sponsor:Nette Onclaud

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/7/2014 8:57:00 AM

Coming by THIS gorgeous poem to wish you a very happy birthday. HOpe it is still your birthday in India!! luv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/27/2011 9:58:00 AM

I am stopping by your wonderful poetry today to thank you for your kind comments on my writing Harry. Hope you have an inspiration filled week. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/26/2011 1:12:00 PM

so sensuous and revealing nice write and great win Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/24/2011 5:56:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with your Weave A Rondelet poem Kashinath. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/23/2011 7:51:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette, kashinath

John Freeman

Date: 9/22/2011 7:56:00 PM

Kashinath, A worthy presentation for the contest, Congratulations on your worthy work. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/22/2011 5:45:00 PM

Congrats Kash on another great win with another grand entry of excellent poetry my friend...luv..

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/15/2011 6:00:00 PM

awesome kashinath, really like this, good luck. harry

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/15/2011 11:00:00 AM

thankxx Kash.. luv reading u as one of the first poets on PS as your words are always so infatuating and fascinating my friend..luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/14/2011 8:18:00 AM

The best to you in the contest Kashinath. Love, Carol

Margaret Foster

Date: 9/14/2011 5:45:00 AM

Fantasies in sensuous silk really does weave silent secrets. Looks like a winner here Kash. luv Marg

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/14/2011 1:33:00 AM

u have weaved a delightful rendezvous Kash and a passionate encounter.. bare shoulders.. moon light and your words sing .. good luck in the contest my friend..luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/13/2011 9:38:00 PM

Kash, this is the kind of imagery that Nette is going to be wild about!! I predict it will do better than mine(if mine places at all!) Excellent imagery.Luv, Andrea

Dan Kearley

Date: 9/13/2011 7:31:00 PM

Thats very nice! I think it is def a winner.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/13/2011 5:29:00 PM

Beautiful rondelet, Kash. Especially love the line about opening up "fantasies' floodgate." Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/13/2011 4:35:00 PM

thanks for jumping in, bud!... will take a longer look at this pretty soon... come, ring ring!:) huggs, nette

David Williams

Date: 9/13/2011 3:25:00 PM

kash, really like the idea of a "moonwalk from anklet to bracelet" good luck, drinks on the way, have had one of those days here, thanks again, hopefully will both be in the winners circle..David