Kash Poet Poet Rondeau

A Silky Moonwalk

Her bare shoulder
red silky strap's open secret
her bare shoulder
sensuous silk's silent wonder
opens up fantasies' floodgate
moonwalk from anklet to bracelet
her bare shoulder


© 2011 kashinath karmakar
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Placement:4th;(Sept.2011)

By:kashinath karmakar (13th Sept.2011)

Contest:Weave a Rondelet

Sponsor:Nette Onclaud

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Andrea Dietrich October 7, 2014 at 8:57 AM Coming by THIS gorgeous poem to wish you a very happy birthday. HOpe it is still your birthday in India!! luv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown September 27, 2011 at 9:58 AM I am stopping by your wonderful poetry today to thank you for your kind comments on my writing Harry. Hope you have an inspiration filled week. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi September 26, 2011 at 1:12 PM so sensuous and revealing nice write and great win Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown September 24, 2011 at 5:56 PM Congratulations on your win with your Weave A Rondelet poem Kashinath. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta September 23, 2011 at 7:51 AM Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette, kashinath

John Freeman September 22, 2011 at 7:56 PM Kashinath, A worthy presentation for the contest, Congratulations on your worthy work. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 22, 2011 at 5:45 PM Congrats Kash on another great win with another grand entry of excellent poetry my friend...luv..

Harry Horsman September 15, 2011 at 6:00 PM awesome kashinath, really like this, good luck. harry

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 15, 2011 at 11:00 AM thankxx Kash.. luv reading u as one of the first poets on PS as your words are always so infatuating and fascinating my friend..luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown September 14, 2011 at 8:18 AM The best to you in the contest Kashinath. Love, Carol

Margaret Foster September 14, 2011 at 5:45 AM Fantasies in sensuous silk really does weave silent secrets. Looks like a winner here Kash. luv Marg

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 14, 2011 at 1:33 AM u have weaved a delightful rendezvous Kash and a passionate encounter.. bare shoulders.. moon light and your words sing .. good luck in the contest my friend..luv..

Andrea Dietrich September 13, 2011 at 9:38 PM Kash, this is the kind of imagery that Nette is going to be wild about!! I predict it will do better than mine(if mine places at all!) Excellent imagery.Luv, Andrea

Dan Kearley September 13, 2011 at 7:31 PM Thats very nice! I think it is def a winner.

Carolyn Devonshire September 13, 2011 at 5:29 PM Beautiful rondelet, Kash. Especially love the line about opening up "fantasies' floodgate." Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud September 13, 2011 at 4:35 PM thanks for jumping in, bud!... will take a longer look at this pretty soon... come, ring ring!:) huggs, nette

David Williams September 13, 2011 at 3:25 PM kash, really like the idea of a "moonwalk from anklet to bracelet" good luck, drinks on the way, have had one of those days here, thanks again, hopefully will both be in the winners circle..David