A Silhouette of Love

A Shakespearean/English Sonnet

At first you dwelled in unrequited dreams
when last your gaze escaped beyond the tide,
to where the sunset's wink was just a gleam
and where my hopeful heart does gladly ride.
I ... much too shy to interrupt your gaze;
nor could I see that smiles were mixed with tears.
Your silhouette was blurred within the haze
where waves of thought were tossed through many years.
Yet somehow you could sense the fate we shared
as throngs upon the shore became but two -
then pain was worth the risk we once more dared
and passion was the sky in which we flew.
The night was one which never slipped away,
it lives within my thoughts through every day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Tripp Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 1:06 PM
Another beautifully penned sonnet. May I learn from you. Fantastic write!
Cornish Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 2:54 PM
Anytime, Rhoda, I would love to help where ever you want
Dutta Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 10:37 AM
Gone through the poem again and again. poetic n beautiful.It touched me
La France Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 4:12 PM
Craig, I love your English Sonnet, a wonderful example for your contest
Cozart Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 2:37 PM
Beautiful.
Cornish Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 2:53 PM
Dale, thank you
Evans Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 4:22 AM
The line "passion was the sky in which we flew" is great. A sonnet is tailor made for romance. Thanks for sharing................peace!
Cornish Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 2:53 PM
Thank you Richard
Ashley Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 9:14 PM
Such beautiful poetic expression, rhyme, rhythm and amazing imagery in your write Craig. I truly enjoyed reading it this evening! :)
Cornish Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 2:52 PM
Thank you Susan
Roper Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 6:08 PM
Nicely done, Craig, enjoyed reading,,, Hugs Eve ~`*
Cornish Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 2:52 PM
thanks so much Eve
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