A Silent Rose

leave me 
in my solitude
to enjoy the silence

let myself
float on
a peaceful river

I lend my petal’s ear
to the wave
and enjoy it’s lullaby

a moment

my longing begins to languish

the sidelong glances of beetles and butterflies

in my park’s hustle

I hope to pick up early dawn 
greet the dew 
and feel their coolness

glance at 
sea breeze
impassioned in longing

bring me back

to my garden
where I belong to

and sit there
as a silent rose

~ (c) Sukmawati Komala ~
08 June 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Andresen Avatar
June 9, 2013 at 2:35 PM
- Beautiful poem, Sukmawati! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Neels Avatar
June 9, 2013 at 11:21 AM
Sukma, absolutely love your poem. Lovely scene painted with your words ;) *hugs* Wilma
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June 9, 2013 at 11:04 AM
wow, You have painted a nice feeling of wanting to feel nothing but solitude. a lovely rose, and garden that seems the fittest.. lovely and a perfect 10 poem.. Linda
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