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A Silent Night, a Holy Night

The sun has set and the shadows fled The feathered flocks flown to their nest Weary men after the day’s toil and care Are back home for sleep and rest No bird sings and no beast strays No tramp wanders and no lights shimmer Silence rules and peace prevails The sky is clear and the stars do glimmer Buds unfold in shady glades A sweet aroma pervades the air Fluttering leaves sing a lullaby And glow worms reel on wings of fire Birds and beasts, in Nature’s bosom rest Babies nap cuddling to their mothers tight Tired men stretch out under quilts for ease The world, asleep with dreams sweet and bright A brief interlude from all angry strife A time of farewell to all frivolous conceits A holy night to bury our woes And a God sent time to ease our spirits! Placed First in the Contest. 29 Dec. 2021 Strand No.1042 Poetry Contest Sponsor- Brian Strand

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Date: 12/30/2021 5:24:00 AM
Enchanting and peaceful beauty expressed exquisitely Valsa. Congratulations on your wonderful first place win. New year blessings xxoo
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Date: 12/30/2021 2:25:00 AM
Congrats on your win. Your poem is so delicate, soothing and tranquil. Your poetry is always beautiful. Wishing you a Happy New Year, my friend.
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Date: 12/29/2021 10:06:00 PM
Even in the darkest spaces of night, your story defines, soothes, and sparkles! You've written another 'BEAUTY', Valsa!!...ab
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Date: 12/29/2021 8:48:00 PM
Gee, keep writing these. It's comforting to read them -- a buffer against the stormy world we live in. Lovely penned, Valsa! :) gw
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Date: 12/29/2021 2:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Valsa. You did an excellent job telling the story. Beautiful pen......Debra
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Date: 12/29/2021 12:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful story/write. Have a blessed day and New Year 2022...........
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Date: 12/29/2021 10:31:00 AM
Some should try your poem instead of a sedative . . . . Aloha!
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Date: 12/29/2021 9:05:00 AM
You paint lovely images, Valsa, and one can feel the serenity of that silent holy night. ~ Best regards // paul
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Date: 12/29/2021 8:57:00 AM
Valsa, Your poem has a peaceful tone that I noted restful. You depict a tranquil evening filled with lyrical metaphors that are relaxing. Your final verse truly catches the essence of the night: the holiness of the night!
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Date: 12/29/2021 7:13:00 AM
A lovely peaceful poem. Congratulatiions. This could be sung as a lullaby. Best, SuZ
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Date: 12/29/2021 6:25:00 AM
Wonderful work. Not very easy to win in Strand contest. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/29/2021 5:38:00 AM
Enjoyed the peaceful tone of your poem, Valsa. A serene night you describe, with eloquent images that offer comfort. Your ending stanza sums it up--the holiness of the night!
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Date: 12/29/2021 6:06:00 AM
Peace is something so much needed in our strife ridden world. So I try to disseminate the vibes of peace ! Much gratitude Vijay !
Date: 12/29/2021 3:03:00 AM
You paint a very tranquil scene Valsa, good luck in the contest. Hope your week is going well. Tom
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Date: 12/29/2021 6:04:00 AM
Thanks a lot Tom ! Wish you peace and joy in the new Year !

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