A Silent Good-Bye

A Silent Good-bye

She didn’t see it slipping away
did not feel time’s erasers
slowly clearing the board
was not aware of her shrinking world.

It took longer to find things
like words and faces
memories and laughter
her cigarettes.

She did not feel the cold
numbing her thoughts
a lifetime fading
to black.

She had seen them leave once 
10 children
off to school, to marriage,
too soon, too far.

Now she watched them
leaving again, fading,
slipping away
forever.


2/11/2018

submitted to – Loss of an Innocent Mind – Poetry Contest
sponsor – Kai Michael Neumann
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 4:03 PM
Very touching, John. Lovely. Congrats on a wonderful winner of a poem.
Neumann Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 2:49 AM
Very well expressed. Clear and subtle at the same time. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Many wishes, Kai
Roper Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 10:56 PM
Awesome write, John, congratulations on your win hugs Eve
Ashley Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 1:01 PM
Wow.. such a poignant portrayal John. Sadly emotional especially your second and third stanzas. Delicately and beautifully expressed.. Congratulations on your excellent win with this heartbreaking poem. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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February 12, 2018 at 8:37 AM
Heartbreakingly sad! A brilliant write John. ~ Judy
Cunningham Avatar
February 11, 2018 at 9:49 AM
Brilliant verse John, Sometimes you feel someone has pressed fast forward on your life ,you watch your family and others growing not realising you're growing too.Good luck in the contest. Regards Tom
Michael Avatar
February 11, 2018 at 8:43 AM
True words of life...Nice poem...All the best John
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