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A Sight Timeless

Weaved hems of lime and gold shimmer about She’s held in midair stupor Indeed a timeless sight 18/2/15 Grace Mutindi Contest: In Praise of a Kimo (Visual 2) Checked: www.howmanysyllables.com

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Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 3/23/2015 9:04:00 AM

Congratulations my friend Grace. Keep that pen dancing. ..

Debra Squyres

Date: 3/19/2015 11:05:00 AM

It's like a dream interpretation... love it !! Congrats on your placement in the contest !!

Grace Mutindi
Date: 3/20/2015 5:15:00 AM

Hi Debra, Thanks a lot for your visit and kind words!

Hannington Mumo

Date: 3/18/2015 12:36:00 AM

A wonderful kimo... I hope you will one day teach me how to condense wild poetic emotions into a line or two. A 7!

Grace Mutindi
Date: 3/19/2015 5:40:00 AM

Thanks Mumo, I must admit this was my first one, but it's great being part of this wonderful poetry world, I'm learning so much!

Casarah Nance

Date: 3/13/2015 4:35:00 PM

Very interesting colored detail. I enjoyed this one. Grats on your contest placement :)

Grace Mutindi
Date: 3/16/2015 4:41:00 AM

Hi Casarah, Glad you enjoyed and thanks for your visit!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/13/2015 7:55:00 AM

a beautiful kimo Grace many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Grace Mutindi
Date: 3/16/2015 4:42:00 AM

Hey Jan, always good seeing you visit, much appreciation!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/25/2015 6:07:00 PM

Oh, I think the contest went away so I cannot see that visual again! It went out of my mind but I bet you did it justice here.

Grace Mutindi
Date: 3/5/2015 7:07:00 AM

Hi Andrea, thank you for visiting my poem and your kind words.