A Shower of Dirtiness

Getting clean in a hot shower
Gives you a smell like a flower
Pretty and fragrant like a a rose
From your head down to your toes
But when you are really flirty
I don't feel clean--just dirty
Steaming up the glass door
Clothes are scattered on the floor
Soaping up its slippery
Falling for your trickery
To join you in this fun game
This hot waters like a flame
Pulsating on us strong and steady
Until we both are ready
To get warm and really cozy
Under blankets--cheeks so rosy
From the hotness we just shared
Not one ounce of love was spared
As we got dirty in the action
Leading to desired passion
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A   Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 6:02 PM
Robin. Congratulations on your XOOL flirting poetic win. Love LINDA"
Davis Avatar
July 25, 2015 at 11:45 AM
thanks so much Linda. glad you enjoyed it. have a nice day
A. Sharma Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 2:43 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win robin!
Davis Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 8:29 AM
thank you so much for the great comment. glad you enjoyed it. Have a nice day
Carter Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 8:12 AM
Love your poem... So hot and flirty! Congrats on your win!
Davis Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 8:29 AM
thank you for the nice comment. glad you enjoyed it. have a nice day
Wigley Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 8:49 PM
Quick, pass me a towel! This flirt is throbbin', Robin- congrates! Regards, Viv
Davis Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 8:30 AM
Passing you a cold towel. LOL thanks for the nice comment. glad you enjoyed it. Have a nice day
A  Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 2:34 PM
Robin, congratulations on your flirtatious win. SKAT LOVE
Davis Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 8:31 AM
thanks SKAT for the nice comment. glad you enjoyed it. have a nice day.
Allison Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 2:26 PM
ooh hot and steamy Robin - you came back with a bang! many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Davis Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 8:32 AM
you better get under some cold water Jan. LOL Have a nice day. thanks for the nice comment.
Nance Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 1:53 PM
Good to see you back! Thanks for joining my contest and great job ;)
Davis Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 8:33 AM
Thanks for the welcome back. glad you enjoyed my poem and placing me in your contest. Have a nice day
Dietrich Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 6:27 PM
ooh la la. this one is HOT and dirty. I liked it!!!
A  Avatar
March 27, 2014 at 10:52 PM
WOW, get rid of the dirtiness. Another great ending. SKAT
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