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A Show In the Sky

by Michael J Falotico
                                                       the trees sway with dance..
                                                       the sky a stage for a show..
                                                            my seat, the window..

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Dinda Minardi

August 29, 2011 at 11:56 AM

I wish I had this kind of window, Michael. A window as a source of your inspiration. Simple and sweet, Michael. :)

Andrea Dietrich

August 28, 2011 at 10:29 PM

wow, I love this, Michael. your seat at the window is a great last line!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

August 28, 2011 at 7:44 PM

and Irene gave everyone a great show Michael ..so glad all are safe now but the billion dollars damages in NJ according to the governor is massive.. wonderful words outline the feelings projected so well for your viewing pleasure luv.. glad all are safe and sound especially u two.. your Jersey Girl back in beach mode luv.. always and forever ...xoxo

Constance La France

August 28, 2011 at 6:24 PM

Just a wonderful, Haiku, Michael, that is what I am doing right now, we are getting tremendous winds in Ottawa this evening, the trees are swaying for sure ~~ Love Constance

Carolyn Devonshire

August 28, 2011 at 4:51 PM

Perhaps this lovely haiku was inspired by Hurricane Irene? If so, please stay away from the window! LOL Would hat to see you get hurt. Very much enjoyed the imagery here, Michael. Per your comment, I keep hoping the play will come together, but we just aren't rehearsing enough. Running lines alone isn't very helpful when most of the lines are responses to actions. Hope you haven't gotten hit too hard by Irene. Love, Carolyn

Tim B

August 28, 2011 at 4:42 PM

Oh the sky and what lies beyond is an infinite stage upon which many acts have been played my friend, but whats beyond that is grander still :) Well said though, a beautiful haiku.