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a shooting star

Tell you this again, When you see A shooting star, Someone loves you, Someone tells you “Eat chocolates” Offer jewelry, Think of me, then, Pineapple flavors, Mango flavors, On a distant island There is happiness, Tell you this again When you see A shooting star, There’s someone who loves you. Dites-vous ceci, Quand vous voyez Une étoile filante, Quelqu’un vous aime, Quelqu’un vous dit Mangez des chocolats Offrez des bijoux, Pensez à moi, alors, Parfum d’ananas, Parfum de mangue, Sur une ile lointaine Il y a du bonheur, Redites-vous ceci Quand vous voyez Une étoile filante, Quelqu’un vous aime.

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Speaks Volumes

Date: 11/30/2023 7:58:00 PM

I don't read French quite well enough to go alone on the second one, but I loved the English version Yann. C'est magnifique mon ami.

Yann Rolland
Date: 11/30/2023 10:45:00 PM

Merci beaucoup SV, for the compliment that touch me deeply, have a sweet day

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/19/2023 7:14:00 PM

I like it in both languages lol

Yann Rolland
Date: 11/30/2023 10:45:00 PM

i miss your comment Rose, oopppps, thank you

Anisha Dutta

Date: 11/19/2023 7:09:00 PM

Bengali proverb says, if you wish any thing when you chanced to see a shooting star, your wish will be fulfilled. Nice piece. I enjoyed.

Yann Rolland
Date: 11/30/2023 10:46:00 PM

thanks a lot Anisha , this is a wondeful proverb, i will remember lways take care

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 11/19/2023 2:59:00 PM

Yann, I agree with you. The stars talk to us and the most of times we don't even see them. What a waste of time for them to make such a big effort, when we don't even appreciate the light and the strenght that give to us. Well done my friend. I really loved this. Stunning!

Yann Rolland
Date: 11/19/2023 5:17:00 PM

thank you so much, Maria, i guess wa have always to make some effort ( not so big), enjoyed your gracious comment

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 11/19/2023 12:35:00 PM

some profound words my friend.

Yann Rolland
Date: 11/19/2023 5:15:00 PM

thanks a lot, Jerry, i love looking at stars, they inspire me, and they really exist have a nice week

Paige Hind

Date: 11/13/2023 3:22:00 PM

Very sweet. :) Enjoyed!

Yann Rolland
Date: 11/13/2023 11:06:00 PM

thanks Paige for stopping by

Silent One

Date: 11/13/2023 1:41:00 PM

I dont see any shooting starts... does that mean no one loves me? lol.. Great poem and you must be a great wordsmith to write in two different languages..

Yann Rolland
Date: 11/13/2023 11:08:00 PM

thanks a lot SO, there are the limits of the "theorem" of the shooting star, may be someone loves you, i hope so

Ilene Bauer

Date: 11/13/2023 12:42:00 PM

very lovely, yann! i rarely see shooting stars, so i guess that doesn't say much about me, but i love the idea you've expressed...

Yann Rolland
Date: 11/13/2023 11:08:00 PM

thanks Ilene, very much, i love the idea too have a sweet day

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2023 10:57:00 AM

cute one, Yann!!

Yann Rolland
Date: 11/13/2023 11:09:00 PM

thanks a lot andrea, for stopping by kindly

Daniel Turner

Date: 11/13/2023 6:43:00 AM

Very nice Yann. I see them quite often but really never associated them with anyone loving me. Im not that nice, really. LOL

Yann Rolland
Date: 11/13/2023 11:10:00 PM

thanks Daniel, I guess it is just a superstition, but it helps some days

Daisy Meadows

Date: 11/13/2023 1:06:00 AM

A good poem. Well done.

Yann Rolland
Date: 11/13/2023 11:10:00 PM

thank you Jeanette for the support

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/13/2023 12:31:00 AM

The best time to see many shooting stars is the Geminids meteor shower. Blessings.

Yann Rolland
Date: 11/13/2023 11:12:00 PM

thanks Victor, i didn't know, now i will care, thanks for the supportive and kind comment

Ink Empress

Date: 11/12/2023 11:36:00 PM

Oh thats a beautiful thought, i love shooting stars, and i see them often, so next time i see one i will definitely think of this poem and think that theres someone that loves me: soul warming really. Absolutely loved reading this one. Sending you light always

Yann Rolland
Date: 11/13/2023 11:14:00 PM

thanks IE, for the kind and friendly words, enjoyed your warm and friendly comment, an uplifting reading indeed