A Shiny Dime - Nursery Rhyme

Katy had a shiny dime
She placed it in the hands of time
  The clock struck twelve
  Rang out sweet chimes
Her dime a diamond -- so sublime



       March 30, 2021
  Nursery Rhyme 3 Contest
      Sponsor: Eve Roper
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Allison Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 2:13 PM
what a sweet poem GW, many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
Wolf Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 3:13 PM
So nice of you to notice this placement, Jan. Hope you are well. Happiness and Joy, Gershon
Andresen Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 11:50 AM
- Congratulations on your sweet winning poem, Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wolf Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 3:25 PM
Thank you for noticing this placement, Anne-Lise. Cheers, gw
Merryman Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 11:15 AM
A cute nursery rhyme, Gershon! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Wolf Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 5:54 PM
Thank you for noticing my placement, Kim. Best always, Gershon
Kauffman Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 11:11 AM
So fun and so creative Gershon! Perfect length and lyric flow for a nursery rhyme! The rhyme scheme is perfect for a little one! This winner is no "nickel and dime" nursery rhyme. Congrats and high fives!
Wolf Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 5:53 PM
Wow! Appreciate the enthusiasm in your comment, Sam. Light and Luminescence, Gershon
Goldsmith Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 10:25 AM
Back to say..........Congratulations on your win. So wonderful/cute. Have a blessed day..................
Wolf Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 5:50 PM
Thanks for noticing my placement, Paula. Cheers, gw
Y. Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 10:36 PM
Hi Gershon, You penned a good “ nursery rhyme” poem. Congratulations on your winning write. Have a good evening:-) Alexis
Wolf Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 5:49 PM
Thanks for noticing my placement in the contest, Alexis. Light and Joy, Gershon
Roper Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 10:19 PM
Gershon, great rhythm in this great nursery rhyme. Congratulations on your win. . Please join me at my blog Nursery Rhyme 3 Contest - Eve Roper's Blog (poetrysoup.com) Hugs Eve
Wolf Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 5:46 PM
Eve, thank you for your generous assessment of my little ditty. Happiness and Joy, Gershon
Goldsmith Avatar
March 31, 2021 at 8:48 AM
What a wonderful/cute Nursery Rhyme. "Good Luck" Have a blessed day and Easter................
Wolf Avatar
March 31, 2021 at 4:09 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Paula. Blessings, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
March 31, 2021 at 7:59 AM
Very cute! I like this! My granddaughter’s name is Katie so this caught my eye. She just turned 15...slow down time ;)
Wolf Avatar
March 31, 2021 at 4:04 PM
Nice name, 'Katie.' ... Your granddaughter is a little past the age of 'shiny dimes,' methinks. Enjoy her, Kim! :) gw
Sands Avatar
March 31, 2021 at 5:13 AM
Great one Gershon! Sweet :)
Wolf Avatar
March 31, 2021 at 4:13 PM
Thank you so much, Heidi! :) gw
Ligon Avatar
March 30, 2021 at 9:17 PM
This is a catchy nursery rhyme filled with wonder. Best wishes for the contest.
Buehler Avatar
March 30, 2021 at 7:27 PM
This is magical and would be thrilling for a small child to hear, Gershon. Well done! Good luck in Eve's contest. :)
Pettit Avatar
March 30, 2021 at 7:13 PM
Eve should like this one. Good luck with it in her contest.
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