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A Shining Star

you are one that makes me smile
                you seem to have that Chicago style ~

            you a Man with music in his heart
                 being born an Artist at the start~

            Am I sure you know whom you are ?
              In this World people can bring you down
                Or they can make you feel a Star ~

           You a Poet , you a friend , a Music Man 
              If you have forgotten then I wish to remind ~

            Dan Our Poet very loving I find
              Never a doubt a Gentleman in my mind ~

             For Dan ' Da Bears Man ' 
                If you have ever forgotten ..
                well let me remind,  of one so kind ~
        
           A shining Star you are ..Shanity Rain

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Skat A

Date: 11/6/2013 8:28:00 PM

lovely..... Love ~SKAT~

Shanity Rain
Date: 11/7/2013 4:35:00 PM

Thank-you Skat!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/31/2013 6:15:00 PM

Way to go ..Congrats on your win..Sara

Shanity Rain
Date: 10/31/2013 9:48:00 PM

Thank-you Sara , you never miss a chance to congratulate others on their wins !! I think that tells me quite a lot about your beautiful spirit ..love , Shanity rain

Shanity Rain

Date: 10/31/2013 12:01:00 PM

Dan , Da bears man ..I just noticed a typo ! Thanks for giving me the honor of a win ..I am fixing it now .. all the poets win to me .

Karen Anglesey

Date: 10/31/2013 10:43:00 AM

Very nicely written with the personal touches. Congrats on your win :)

Shanity Rain
Date: 10/31/2013 11:59:00 AM

Thank-you Karen , I hope , you will write something for my 1st contest "American Indian People " in your work I have been able to read, you have that flavor ! Of course if you do , do not put name at the bottom , for my goal is to choose equal to all, you have this wonderful presence about you !

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/30/2013 8:25:00 PM

lovely write for the contest...congrats on your win :)

Shanity Rain
Date: 10/31/2013 11:56:00 AM

Thank-you Sandra , I love the time you take to encourage all with your beautiful comments . Beauty is gifted inside and out ~

Donna Jones

Date: 10/30/2013 2:46:00 PM

Beautiful poem..and tribute..congratulations

Shanity Rain
Date: 10/30/2013 3:08:00 PM

Thank-you Donna ~ I love that picture !

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/29/2013 9:18:00 PM

Congrats on the win in the contest of Dan, Shanity

Shanity Rain
Date: 10/30/2013 9:03:00 AM

Thank-you Dr. I have noticed you taking ..I thought 1st place and wanted to read and always congratulate you my inspiration ! I feel awful for I can not always do that , trying to keep a roof over head ~ Thinking of my Fav DR !

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/29/2013 9:07:00 PM

congratulations Shanity, have a nice day...LINDA

Shanity Rain
Date: 10/30/2013 9:06:00 AM

Thank-you my sweet friend Linda , again , I have wanted to read your poems to , I have not been able to . I know you are really worthy of being number 1 in many a contest , I have seen you !! Congratulation's my super star!