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A Shining Flower Vase ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ \\ I I // \\ I I // \\ I I // \ / I I hold the I I loveliest I I flowering I / blooms of \ / the spring \ / seasons and I \ / ignite the rooms \ / of all fervent lovers, \ /of monarchs and kings \ / of lords, barons, nobles \ / as of the commonest men. \ / I adorn the shrines of temples,\ / chapels, churches and pagodas. \ / Whether carved in glass, in bronze, \ I in copper, in silver or in gold, I shine I I reflecting light to illuminate the lives I I of all laudable onlookers of beauty. I \----------------------------------------/ \-------------------------------------/
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