A Shift In Persuasion

Like quicksand under the ocean waves,
you can break and fall away,
this landslide so undisturbed,
for the life force of my brightly smile.

All of life is in the palm of your hands,
but you wouldn't have to see that,
to believe that.

So Farewell to the skies and the rolling of the waves,
like all things in life, the beauty of a sunset fades,
but not all things always return.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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April 20, 2016 at 3:09 AM
Eve Chilicas, nicely done. Glad to read your poem today. XoX *Linda*"
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