A Shark Is Lurking

There's a shark lurking in the soup they say
With sharp teeth ready to strike any day
Our pens remain our best weapons
No matter what the shark threatens
We will just write more to send him away

12/27/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Olaoluwa  Avatar
May 18, 2022 at 2:23 PM
Awesome caption that depict great sense of imagery. Well done bard.
Kitchin Avatar
May 19, 2022 at 9:15 AM
Thank you!
Awtry Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 5:54 PM
nice limerick! Congratulations!
Kitchin Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 6:13 PM
Thank you!
Dietrich Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 4:29 PM
this is REALLY nice, Tania. Congrats being on the winner list. I enjoyed your succinct writing on the theme a lot
Kitchin Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 6:13 PM
Thank You!
Devonshire Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 2:37 PM
That's the spirit, Tania. Congratulations on your success in Anthony's contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
Kitchin Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 3:55 PM
Thank you!
Gauthier Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 6:59 AM
Congrats, Tania.
Kitchin Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 7:29 AM
thank you!
Allison Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 4:15 AM
still love your message Tania:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 4:55 AM
Thank you Jan!
Faulkner Avatar
December 27, 2018 at 5:41 PM
The pen is mightier than the shark, great limerick, tania!
Kitchin Avatar
December 27, 2018 at 7:40 PM
thank you Michelle!
Onclaud Avatar
December 27, 2018 at 2:13 PM
right on, tania.. let's all do this so we'll have a peaceful new year... huggs
Kitchin Avatar
December 27, 2018 at 4:05 PM
Thanks, hope we can!
Allison Avatar
December 27, 2018 at 1:11 PM
If we all work together Tania it may happen lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
December 27, 2018 at 4:05 PM
Let's hope Jan!
Devonshire Avatar
December 27, 2018 at 7:50 AM
Great limerick, Tania, and I've been hearing a lot about this "shark." Perhaps we CAN repel him with our pens. Very clever. Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn
Kitchin Avatar
December 27, 2018 at 9:20 AM
Thank you Carolyn!
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