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A Shared Demise

allusion, best friend, destiny, farewell, funeral, love, romance, A SHARED DEMISE! © Coupled ‘lifers’ love is spent when terminated time sets in This lovers state of affairs does ‘mirror’ a set rule of the ages Outstanding duos do ‘voice’ as real friends sharing a mind in tune Their clocked-time reverses knowing a finale means only one It choruses from their minds and lips between two set songs Shared prayers of wishes, hopes, and one last requests for mated-sake Coupled for that one eventual and ‘significant’ closure, for whom ‘the death tolls’ A significant demise for the remaining one will be from broken-hardheartedness Nature’s culling moments bare no ‘witnessing’ to its’ taking lovers ‘two by two’.

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/29/2015 7:13:00 AM

This is food for thought. I have been with my wife for 22 years and it is hard to imagine that one day I may be on my own. It feels like we have forever and a day.

Diane M Quinlan

Date: 5/26/2015 9:09:00 AM

Time forsakes time does it not? Had to write this.....glad you enjoyed this one. Have been reading all of your goodies--a lot! Want to read some again and again and again....

Skat A

Date: 5/25/2015 8:14:00 PM

enjoyed this one .. *always, S.K.A.T.*

Diane M Quinlan
Date: 6/9/2015 5:23:00 PM

Thanks Skata for reading another one of my efforts.This was a task at hand but I am glad I found the words necessary to convey the thoughts I have about loosing a very loved one......didee--- take care