A Shallow Examination of Best-Friendship

Playmates is all we
ever were and ever wanted.
To be friendly, frisky, rambunctious even.
Sometimes “ever” gets tricky seems
somewhere it got that way.

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Usually when I lie about the form, it's because it makes me laugh to do so... love you guys muchly! ~N
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Maverick Avatar
December 28, 2011 at 4:54 AM
Rambunctious Nancy..) haven't heard that word for a while.. as for shallow or "shallows" even they exist in the depths of the world,, and ever ( only is.. ) always good to read you,,i am a little wary..) of the ( A-word ) you used in the last comment to me..? "however we seem to get along fine..i just don't want an xxplosion of the wrong type.? & (what would the U N say..! you could have sanctions slapped on you..! ( haha) yours Joe..
Jones Avatar
December 28, 2011 at 5:29 AM
hehe, k, so compliance doesn't come naturally to me but if I concentrate really hard I can do it.. comment modified, now the UN can focus elsewhere :)
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