A Serious Case of You

Trembling feet, weak in the knees,
Fever set to boil these seas.
Poor little head, its splitting ache,
The sweetest pain i’ll ever take.
Tummy churns, this feeling burns,
And waves of awe do take their turns.
A pounding heart, I feel it too,
Now this malaise to me is new.
Quivering voice, sweaty hands,
This immune system stands no chance.
It’s killing me, I tell you true,
I’ve got a serious case of YOU!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Agustin Avatar
April 2, 2024 at 11:48 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 7, 2016 at 1:15 PM
love the poem
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November 15, 2015 at 10:54 PM
Karl, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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