For the 'Ten lines from Ten poems' Poetry Contest of Silent One
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I’m drowning in sunset’s last yellow rays. Clouds plush as pillows cavort, then fade away. I want to see, to touch, to feel, and breathe the ocean in; to seize each sacred second – not to stray. In primrose twilight, summer lingers near. A giant stillness surrounds me. There is so much glory to behold touching the horizon of a placid periwinkle sea. Ecstasy envelops me. I melt like ice cream. September disrobed is a Sapphire night. 1. The Field at Sunset 2. A Summer Sunset On a Beach 3. Ocean Sonata 4. Embracing Solitude 5. And Sweet is Her Demise 6. Saturated in Silence 7. In Autumn’s Eves of Gold 8.Dusk 9, Dulcet Dreams 10, Song of September
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